Comments | nyx_kendaya: [ILC07] Melodic Temptations

kendayawind in nyx_kendaya

[ILC07] Melodic Temptations

Mar 20, 2011 04:05

Rating: PG-13
Pairing: HanChul
Genre: AU!Supernatural, Romance
Disclaimer: I don't own any SuJu member.
Beta: paradigm_twist
IL/Pairing Assigner: rssj1314 & shadowcrawler12
[Challenge][Y][FF] Summary: A creature able to seduce any man with just a song, the man who was unable to leave his side despite not being forced by any spell.

( He picked up his pace, wiping the sweat away from his temple, as he looked down to the man underneath him with a devious grin. Things were just getting started. )

c: hankyung, c: heechul, challenge♣initial line, | length: one-shots, type: fanfiction, pairing: hanchul, type: yaoi

Comments 7

rssj1314 March 20 2011, 09:08:31 UTC

My spot! <3

-edit-

You are seriously really into supernatural-ness lately. Not that it's a bad thing though, I love reading it! XD And you always write it so beautifully T.T
Heechul's story kinda reminds me of that Chinese Ghost Story thingy where the girls have to seduce men and kill them. It's bitter sweet, really. Especially for Heechul... like, when he's saying how no one would want him if they saw the real him. HANKYUNG DOES! omg. Open your eyes Heechul T.T Hankyung wants you!

Semi disappointed that you didn't continue my line properly.. but I'll give you a break cause you're still warming up to the whole smut thing. Or just "M" rated things in general. You're still my little baby girl <3 My motherly side screams proud but my friend side is struggling to prevent myself from forcing Ciel to show you things.. lol ( ... )

followurdestiny March 20 2011, 13:59:14 UTC

Haunting, but beautifully written... love the hidden melancholy... still there's more happiness in the future :D

kendayawind March 21 2011, 17:43:14 UTC

Waa~ Thank you~! ^^ Definitely happiness in their future ^^ Thank you for reading and commenting~! :)

ink_river10 March 20 2011, 15:57:44 UTC

Wow this was amazing!!! It's beautiful and intriguing. Are you going to write more or is this just a one-shot? MORE PLZ! :)

kendayawind March 21 2011, 18:18:41 UTC

Just a one-shot lol, but I'd be lying if I said I wasn't thinking of it >< Especially since the supernatural bug isn't leaving me ^^. Glad you thought so ^-^
Thank you for reading and commenting~! :)

tokkei_12 March 20 2011, 20:21:47 UTC

Ah, Heechul would make a very lovely siren-like creature indeed. And that was so sweet of Hankyung to see Heechul's true self and promise to stay with him forever >.< Very gorgeous!

kendayawind March 21 2011, 18:25:32 UTC

He would :) At least Hankyung of all people wouldn't mind to stay by his side and keep that promise, despite what Heechul is.
Thank you for reading and commenting~! :)