Comments | nyx_kendaya: [ILC05] Deception of Reality

kendayawind in nyx_kendaya

[ILC05] Deception of Reality

Mar 05, 2011 23:31

Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Hensung
Genre: AU!Drama, Romance, Minor!Angst
Disclaimer: I don't own any SuJu member.
IL/Pairing Assigner: rssj1314 & shadowcrawler12
[Challenge][Y][FF] Summary: He couldn't listen to that voice that told him it was too late nor the reasoning of others who tried to relieve his suffering. He was only able to focus in one that image before him, of ( Read more... )

c: henry, challenge♣initial line, c: yesung, pairing: hensung, | length: one-shots, type: fanfiction, type: yaoi

Comments 7

rssj1314 March 6 2011, 05:34:38 UTC

SPOT IS MIIIIIIIIIIIINES.

I ALMOST KILLED YOU FOR A BROKEN HENSUNG! >=[ But.. ugh, I loved it. I always love everything you write T.T

"If you actually cared, then come into bed with me."

^I love that line. So much. <3

I really like the way you write illusions - in all the stories you've written them, you make them so... I dunno, realistic? The way Yesung yearned for it and how it always happened and he knew it was an illusion but still reached out to it and watch it fall apart... it broke my heart. ;A; but then Henry really came.. and they were in bed (not the pervy kind).. and everything was/is good again.

Amazing. As always.

I love this pairing SO MUCH because of you <3 ILY, NYX!

ext_313544 March 6 2011, 08:11:05 UTC

once again, im stunned. illusions and your stories are slowly becoming my new BFF X] (im just weird that way ROFL)

i like the subtle moments in the stories. mixed with all that heartache, alcohol and illusions. and finally reality... though why is your Henry always so heartbreaking????

thanks for sharing! and i hope your muse is being nice to you =)

kendayawind March 6 2011, 22:27:53 UTC

xD I'm good with that way ;)
I don't know T.T Henry just says time for some drama! If that makes any sense... The next stories with him don't seem to happy either now that I think of it...
I hope so too! She's being put to work as we speak ^-^
Thank you for reading and commenting~! :)

shu_ki March 8 2011, 21:47:18 UTC

* A *

I thought it was broken hesung. I was like, "noooo, don't, don't, don't." Then as I read further and Henry wasn't an illusion anymore, I was like, "yesssss. yes, yes, yes!"

Anyways, I really like this one-shot, how one illusion breaks into the other and finally it was reality. The way the mood was set up was really nice and I like your characterization of the two. I really loved it~! Thank you for sharing! :D :D :D

kendayawind March 10 2011, 05:25:42 UTC

xD Definitely not a broken hensung, I can't bear to do that ><
Illusions are a favorite thing of mine~ Its distracting for the most part but sooner or later you'll have to face reality. Glad you liked it ^^ I worked so fast to make it to the deadline @.@
Thank you for reading and commenting~! :)

jishu April 15 2011, 16:07:39 UTC

Whew~! I thought Henry was already dead but I'm glad he wasn't and I love the angst here!! <3

kendayawind April 16 2011, 20:24:51 UTC

xD I could never kill Henry! (well...maybe not never .-. Hoping I don't go that deep into angst lol) But he's definitely alive in this fic! ^^

Thank you for reading and commenting~! :)