BSG Fic: Lips of an Angel [K/L]

[nytel]

Title: Lips of an Angel
Author: Nytel
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: LYDB 2 and some season 3 speculation.
Pairing: Kara/Lee and Lee/Dee
Genre: Romance/Angst
Summary: Lee finds it hard to be faithful.
Word Count: 4,109
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Comments

[carpenyx]

I really enjoyed this.

“Night,” he said quietly as she pulled away. Before she could leave, he put down his pen and reached over to place his hand over the very noticeable swell of her abdomen. He felt the sudden urge to tug up the bottom of her shirt and kiss her belly, directly over where his unborn child was growing, but he didn’t.

I don't know what it is about this but it's just really sad.

“We were flying,” she stated, as if that explained it all, and maybe it did. He recalled his dream vividly. They’d been flying too, but not in the literal sense.

Very powerful, I can so see the connection between them both.

Just as their lips were about to brush against each other, his eyelids closed. He wanted to savor the feeling of Kara’s lips pressed tightly against his own, burn the memory of her mouth opening under his into his brain yet again. But as he got to the point where their lips should have touched, he felt nothing but air.

Such a typical Kara/Lee moment! I loved it.

Troubled thoughts caressed Lee’s mind as he drifted

[nytel]

I don't know what it is about this but it's just really sad.
-- It is sad. :(

Very powerful, I can so see the connection between them both.
-- *grins*

Such a typical Kara/Lee moment! I loved it.
-- I'm glad you thought so. :)

Exactly! *le sigh* I really loved it, it was sad though, wanting them to find each other but obligated to other people and both very determined and honorable to keep trying with their respected others and not crossing the line.. at least physically. Yeah, so.. very well written and absolutely adored it.
-- I'm glad that you liked it. :) It was sad though. *sniff sniff* I think I might need to write some fluff in the future.

Thanks for all the feedback. :D

[jatnj]

This was a sad but sweet story. Too bad they married the wrong people.

[nytel]

Too bad indeed.

Thanks for reading!

[tracyj23]

I like the way you ended it. Worked out perfectly. :)

It was a lovely piece and I enjoyed reading it (multiple times)!

[nytel]

:D I'm glad it works.

It was a lovely piece and I enjoyed reading it (multiple times)!
-- YAY! It would suck if it got boring to read after the first time, at least for you. ;) (Thanks again.)

[brigantia_65]

Oh this is just sooo them. You know the first time I heard this song, I thought of this particular little triangle myself right off. Very nicely done.

[nytel]

I know, I think it was the first time that I heard it when this whole fic just kind of popped into my head.

[ez_as_pi]

I could so see this.... *big sigh* Lovely job m'dear

[nytel]

Thank you. :)