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[nytel]

Title: Caught Red Handed
Author: Nytel
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Nothing specific.
Summary: Bill catches Kara and Lee in a rather compromising position.
Disclaimer: It's not mine.

Comments

[returnofpiper]

*claps*

I love it. I especially loved that Kara was so formal when dropping off the reports. Lee's reaction was spot on.

[nytel]

Thank you! :)

[viper_knight]

*snickers*

i love her "this is how i would tell the commander" thing. just great.

and the "I need a drink." line at the end. priceless.

♥s for you!

[nytel]

Actually the whole 'this is how I would tell the commander' thing was what originally just popped into my head one day. So then I just had to write it. :)

[jesus_freak1234]

Hee, I love the "I wonder where Saul is. I need a drink." :D

[nytel]

I'm glad that you liked that line. I was actually not 100% sure about it but then everyone seems to really like it so I'm glad I kept it.

[gimp_homegurl]

LMAO! Oh dear lords! Could you imagine walking in on your son and your 'sort of' daughter talking about frakking each other? Oi! Okay obviously you could because you did! lol I'm really enjoying all your fics and, and, and, and I'm almost into the year 2006! HEE!

-Dani-

[nytel]

Of course I can imagine it. *grins*

And yeah for almost being in the right year! Lol. I can't wait until you get to Tangled Up In You, I think that's when I finally *got* the characters. :)