Chapter 18

May 09, 2006 11:32

Title: The Night That Changed All Others
Chapter Title: Chapter 18 - Complexity and Simplicity
Author: Nytel
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: John/Teyla
Genre: Romance, general
Main Characters: John and Teyla, but nearly everyone makes an appearance.
Spoilers: Up to 203.
Summary: Teyla and John spend one night together, and they could never have imagined the series ( Read more... )

tntcao, john/teyla, atlantis, atlantis fic, fan fic

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gimp_homegurl May 9 2006, 18:43:22 UTC
Let me count the ways I love this chapter...

1 - Teyla/John bedroom time! So nothing sexual happens but there's a comfort and familiarity there, like they've been doing it all along and belong there. It's really nice to have them interacting on a personable and intimate level. Plus who doesn't LOVE cuddling? Who I ask you?!

2 - Beckett's portrayal. The man does love to talk about science and I loved the way he'd get a little sidetracked with things that are fascinating to him (the twin connection thing for one). Plus YAY Carson for coming up with a concrete and feasible answer/solution to getting the twins back. Boy have I missed those little buggers.

3 - McKay's saucy attitude! I love that man! Everything about him I just love and like I've said before you do him so much justice. I love the idea of tired, grumpy him trying to explain his theories and getting even more grumpy with John. John/McKay bantering... *swoons*

4 - John in general! The image of him sleep tousled in bed, yum! His jumping on the idea of slaughtering that damned Wraith, hoo yah! But the best part was his idea to nuke the hell out of the Wraith at the end, that impish grin he gets just at the thought. I don't know why but that was just a hot image!

Now what I hate...

The one, the only and the most important - THE END IS NEAR! Okay so that's a good thing, less anguish, Teyla/John get together, the kids are okay and the Wraith are gone but then I don't get my Atlantis fixes! Just so sad, I may cry when the ending comes.

Loved the new chapter Nytel, especially the way you've orchestrated the plot, set things up.

-Dani-

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nytel May 10 2006, 03:12:18 UTC
1 - Thank you. And cuddling is a must. :)

2 - Yay! I'm glad you like it. Beckett's probably my favorite 'minor' character. And I've been missing the twins too.

3 - Lol. It's McKay, I couldn't not put it in there. I love writing McKay. It comes really easily to me and sometimes that worries me. Lol.

4 - The old John is definitely back. :)

And as much as I don't want this to end, I'll be happy to have it finished. Then I can start a new one, and work on my other million stories. :)

Loved the new chapter Nytel, especially the way you've orchestrated the plot, set things up.
- Thank you. :) I never planned this far in advance when I started writing so I'm just glad it all came together.

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gimp_homegurl May 10 2006, 03:25:26 UTC
1 - You are ssssooooo welcome and yes cuddling good!

2 - I hate that Beckett is just a minor character. His accent is to DIE for! ... Hey! Where's number two's smiley face?

3 - Hmm, now that you mention it, I'm a little worried to! And where's number three's smiley face? Everything else but number two got one! Not fair.

4 - Mmm, got to love John, old him, new him, any him!

Ah yes, the many other projects. I know them well... well sort of. I know OF them! lol

This I knew. You have to love how things just fall together like this!

-Dani-

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