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[nytel]

Title: The Night That Changed All Others
Chapter Title: Chapter 9 - Plans
Author: Nytel
Rating: PG-13, (maybe even only PG)
Spoilers: Up to 203 for sure, but very light spoilers, if any, after that.
Summary: Teyla and John spend one night together, and they could never have imagined the series of events that would unfold because of it. These events

Comments

[gimp_homegurl]

Awe darlin'! It wasn't lacking too badly. I'll admit not much happened in the way of plot advancement but over all it was still an enjoyable chapter. I think every story has one or two like this, I know I have had them. Like I said I still enjoyed it.

I laughed when Rodney got stuck on the idea that these Wraith might not be the 'same' as the others from five years ago. That is just such a Rodney thing to do. You are really good at portraying his character. Its because he's just so damned cool and we all love him! ^_^

If I were Teyla I don't know if I would have been strong enough to leave Tagan and Abrianna like that. I suppose to most it would seem like she was running away from them but leaving their side is no easy task. I commend her for it and I commend her ability to seem calm outwardly. We all know inside she's a wreak like John is but she's handling it well.

As for John getting in a little ogling session! Such a guy! In the midst of everything he still managed to let a certain member take the lead for a second or two to do a little admiring. lol!

And of course my answers about Atria have NOT been answered so I am off to the next chapter! (I feel as though I need a cape! I could be a super hero! Just you know, without the spandex! :| Oi...)

-Dani-

[nytel]

Well, I'm glad that it didn't lack too badly, but really there wasn't any plot advancement. This was my last stuck chapter. Then I managed to drag myself out of the gutter and get back on track.

You are really good at portraying his character. Its because he's just so damned cool and we all love him!
-- Thanks, and that is totally the reason. Who doesn't like a snarky, arrogant, astrophysicist geek? I know of nobody.

As for John getting in a little ogling session! Such a guy!
-- Lol, he just couldn't help himself. :)