Summer Nights (10/?)

[nytel]

Title: Summer Nights (10/?)
Author: Nytel
Rating: NC-17 (or at least it will be)
Spoilers: Nada. It's a pre-mini AU fic.
Pairing: Kara/Lee
Genre: Romance
Summary: Neither of them had been expecting anything other than a normal summer break.
Word Count: 2,295
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Comments

[lurker2209]

O yay! More of this. I really love how this played out. Very subtle, understated character development. I like the idea of Micheal, as a fundamentally decent, but unreflective person who doesn't realize he's carrying a grudge, but tries to change once it's brought to his attention. It's quite human.

[nytel]

*g* I happy that you're happy about the update! Lol.

Very subtle, understated character development. I like the idea of Micheal, as a fundamentally decent, but unreflective person who doesn't realize he's carrying a grudge, but tries to change once it's brought to his attention. It's quite human.
--That is pretty much exactly what I was going for. ;) Michael is fundamentally a great guy, just a little dense. And although he doesn't want to admit to being wrong, he's not the kind of person who will blatantly ignore the facts once they're laid out neatly in front of him. :D

Thanks for reading!

[tamsibling]

Yeah for updates! I love this next step of the story - I hope that Kara will forgive Lee for spilling the beans - Michael needed a reality check. And I really hope kara and Lee get some more alone time soon! bring on the smut!

[nytel]

*g* Yay for updates is right! Lol. I always get so excited when I have something new to post, so I'm happy to see other people excited too. :)

I think that although Kara isn't necessarily happy about what Lee did, once he gets a chance to explain it things will be all right. And you know, if they fight they can always make up. ;)

And no worries, there will be more smut in the next chapter. I can guarantee it actually, because it's already written. Lol.

[anonymous]

Oh, I simply loved that chapter! The heart to heart between Lee and Michael was very much needed. And, I love the little Kara and Lee bits that you put in at the end with their whispering. This continues to be my favorite Kara/Lee story ever.

[nytel]

Thank you. And I agree, it was a much needed chat. :)

I'm glad you liked the whispering at the end! I just simply couldn't have a non-piloty chapter. *g*

This continues to be my favorite Kara/Lee story ever.
--Wow, thank you. *blushes* I hope I can keep it at that caliber!

[elzed]

Love the way you've played that - and how Michael is getting the mesage. And can't wait for the next moment of, er, free time for our two increasingly sexually frustrated protagonists...

I keep hoping the work trip gets postponed again!

[nytel]

Thank you! Michael may be a little dense, but he can't ignore the facts once they've been so clearly laid out for him. :)

It won't be long until the pilots get some more, uh, 'free time'. ;)

I'm of two minds about my work trip getting postponed. It would mean more time for writing, but no matter what it has to happen sometime so I kind of want to get it over with. Lol.

[amiyuy]

I was just thinking about this story earlier today!

Yay more! ^_^

[nytel]

Awesome! I'm glad you liked it. :)