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nytel

Chapter 4

Jan 21, 2006 21:59

Story Title: The Night That Changed All Others
Chapter Title: Chapter 4 - Getting to Know
Author: Nytel
Spoilers: Up to 203 for sure, but very light spoilers, if any, after that.
Summary: Teyla and John spend one night together, and they could never have imagined the series of events that would unfold because of it. These events would change the lives ( Read more... )

tntcao, john/teyla, atlantis, atlantis fic, fan fic

Comments 7

sanssong January 22 2006, 06:24:45 UTC

Oh, yeah.... still loving this. I love John as tentative dad. Can't wait to see where it goes. Thanks for posting.

nytel January 24 2006, 00:09:56 UTC

Aw, thanks. :) I'm going to go post the next chapter right away. :)

The Night That Changed All Others anonymous January 23 2006, 23:13:56 UTC

Hey really good story just went back and read the past three chapters. When you update can you note it on the johnandteyla yahoo group if you're a member please??

Re: The Night That Changed All Others nytel January 24 2006, 00:10:25 UTC

Thanks!

And I'm not a member of the yahoo group.

gimp_homegurl April 16 2006, 23:25:23 UTC

Okay so I should stop guessing! lol I'm obviously no good at it because there was no jealous John...

I get why Teyla didn't tell the kids about John, his memory wasn't a pleasant one. I am surprised she didn't tell them something about why they have no father. I like that John felt protective when he picked up Abrianna. Instinctively he knows, now he just need to hear it from Teyla. Then of course comes the mayhem of trying to resolve everything. :|

Tagan is really cute, I like him!

-Dani-

nytel April 17 2006, 01:42:57 UTC

Not yet anyways... I mean, yes. What? *shifty eyes* Are you sufficiently confused?

I can so easily see John being protective of the kids, even if he didn't know they were his. Plus, Abrianna is just too adorable. :)

And I'm glad that you like Tagan. I'm not sure if you picked up on it, but that was Teyla's Dad's name. Something I thought was fun to add in.

gimp_homegurl April 17 2006, 13:38:19 UTC

Sufficiently confused? You are just crule! :P

Is it right that protective John is hot? Yes, yes, it is! :D

I didn't actually, but I read a few other people's comments and they were talkng about it. I guess that's just a testement to how new I am to the fandom lol.

-Dani-