Comments | nytel: Critical Mass Challenge

nytel

Critical Mass Challenge

Jan 21, 2006 21:45

Ok, this was written for a 5 min fic challenge about the episode Critical Mass.

The prompt was: Write about Teyla and John and the torture of a coworker without any hard evidence.

Have Teyla speak to John about his feelings about the attempted torture of Kavanaugh. (Because the "joke" of him passing out first doesn't negate that they *would* have ( Read more... )

one shot fic, john/teyla, atlantis, atlantis fic, fan fic

Comments 17

roguish_angel January 22 2006, 23:27:35 UTC

Very good!

Well thought out and followed through.

nytel January 23 2006, 03:58:41 UTC

I'm glad that you liked it! And thank you for taking the time to review. :)

roguish_angel January 23 2006, 04:36:39 UTC

Not a worry, I write fanfiction too and know how good it is to get any kind of review! :)

Fic anonymous January 23 2006, 00:29:54 UTC

Excellent..Nytel...Love the whole balcony scene..we need more balcony scenes of these two....Camy

Re: Fic nytel January 23 2006, 03:58:59 UTC

I agree! I totally love the balcony scenes. :)

alliesings January 23 2006, 13:44:52 UTC

This is a lovely way to soothe and smooth over some of the potential issues between them. :) And a hug :)

nytel January 24 2006, 05:12:05 UTC

Thanks! I liked the hug too. :)

nicole9514 January 25 2006, 01:18:43 UTC

Great fic....it was realistic and well written. I enjoyed it very much. :)

Critical Mass Challenge wendyjs January 28 2006, 13:40:24 UTC

Just caught up with this. Lovely story. Thank you for sharing

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Wendy
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