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Fic - Donald Strachey Mysteries - In a Word

Apr 07, 2010 23:32

Title: In a Word by NyteFlyer
Fandom: The Donald Strachey Mysteries
Pairing: Donald and Timmy, of course!
Rating: R for language
Word Count: 1250
Spoilers: There’s one microscopic reference to Shock to the System.
Summary: Enquiring minds….
Genre: Utter nonsense
Disclaimer: I’m not making any money here. As always, the rights belong to the ever-so- ( Read more... )

[m]fanfiction, [a]nyteflyer, [g]humor, [r]r

Comments 16

schnuffie April 8 2010, 03:47:06 UTC

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nyteflyer April 8 2010, 04:11:31 UTC

Whoa...you musta read this the split second I posted it to my journal! LOL I don't even have it posted to the forums yet!

jenna_hilary April 8 2010, 16:27:21 UTC

Love this! I always enjoy dialogue only stories, but they have to be written by someone with a fine understanding of how to make the voices ring out without providing "Donald said" or "Timmy exclaimed!" You have the technique down well and give us a lovely little interlude. I like the title too! Thanks for writing (even at 4 a.m.!) and sharing.
Yours,
Jenna

nyteflyer April 8 2010, 22:12:36 UTC

Thanks for reading and commenting, Jenna! I love all-dialogue stories because they're usually light and fun to read, plus they provide the opportunity for a writer to give her characterization muscles a good workout. An enjoyable exercise all way around. Glad you enjoyed it!

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nyteflyer April 8 2010, 22:14:23 UTC

Oh hell, same here. Everyone should have a Timmy (or Donald) in their life.

Thanks for taking the time to read and leave a comment!

candyjbshsc April 9 2010, 01:38:48 UTC

Thanks for the nod--if I had any tiny hand in helping prompt that, YAY! What a sweet story, and a beautiful little look at their love for each other. They both describe each other perfectly!

nyteflyer April 9 2010, 02:31:59 UTC

Yup, your story -- anus beans and sticky chickens in all their sugary glory -- sparked the idea for this little early morning romp. Seemed logical to me that if Donald worried about which failings of his Timmy might gripe about at the office, he might also be stewing over whether or not Timmy saw him as the asshole everyone else described him as being. And once Timmy had doled out reassurances, he'd naturally have to turn the tables on Donald and say okay, now how about ME?

lady529 April 9 2010, 02:52:24 UTC

Aw <3

The Lady 529

nyteflyer April 9 2010, 02:59:56 UTC

Glad you liked it ;)