Dec 15, 2005 00:55
"electric memory phase"
midnight the emir
lumbers by
staunch and naked
wind blisters the cold haunch
unforgettable twilight
iron barbells lumber out
my eyes
rainbow blisters the cold ocean
unforgivable midnight
with beer and spiced wine
your haunch vibrates
under my teeth
blistering eyes
shine from your unforgettable
lumbering caterwaul
exactitude points
speckle grey twilight
white sheets billow
translucent foam and skin
translation quivers
fog swims over your staunch
river of snow
river of wine
silence blisters
emirate midnight is
cold with barbell darkness
heavy moonlight
lonely spiced teeth
drips of ochre beer
foam off the darkness
foam off the beast
it’s like a strange ocean overflew its banks and crumbled into the naked spears of longing fervent midnight chrome frenzies
i camp on the shores and overflow my veins with fervent chrome spears
longing for strange orgy, i’m absent.
excellent pastries.
tantalizing semen.
pillars and empires and strange fulcrums
wrest the story in infinite moments-unique and many.
spiders hang in their web and
christians hallucinate
in the body of you
the meditation is an unfolding bloom
your lotus is the inchoate remembrance
in the angst of a foreign crown
we’re reminded and clamber to your shore
one bleeding mouth after another
a procession of teeth sinking into
your haunch
prayer navigation
blessed erection
blessed fog
blessed crimson wave of flesh
in the silent blisters
i am drowned in cells
droplets and tears and you
fathoms of you
shores of you
pulses of you
-written today
I must say, the title is hardly original, taken from steve reich's "electric guitar phase." i would hate to be accused of plagarism. i started writting with the idea of the musical piece: start with a theme and rework it in a sort of stream of conscious way and just see where it takes you. anyway, this is completely uneditted, so likely to be a major piece of crap, but maybe later i'll actually come back and like pieces of it. i don't usually prefer to have repeated *important* words, such as "fervent", whereas i don't mind repeating less weighty words such as "you", but i thought i would try it out to see if i can make it work. i've tried it in this past and haven't liked the results, but i still like the idea, and WANT to FORCE it to work, damnit! :P also, the shift in the middle is just a product of laziness. i like the form of the first half, but it was holding up my stream of consciousness, trying to stay within that form. i'm not sure what i think of that...hmm...whatever, not like this matters to anyone but me.