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[hitman reborn]: dino/hibari: "symphony"

Nov 25, 2007 03:18

Title: Symphony
Rating: light R
Pairing: D18
Warnings: Well, slash obviously, and biting. Yowch.
Summary: "Tell me what you want."

( curtain up! )

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kasugai_gummie November 25 2007, 20:23:32 UTC

I think most of the other commentors have already touched upon how much awesome you are made of for writing such a beautiful piece of D18. So, rather than sounding like a broken record and reiterating all that, I'm just going to focus on another aspect of this gorgeous piece of writing that just did it for me completely.

So, spectacular take on the characters aside, what really, REALLY just makes me weak in the knees (never mind my sitting while reading this) is Hibari noticing, once in a while, that Dino's foreign. Those constant little reminders in Italian, usually taking place in the form of food of all things (♥!) and the way you insinuate at the change of pace, lilt, and intonation. I LOVE YOU FOR DOING THIS AAAAH.

Well-definition of language and the crossing of its barriers, especially in such a series that really is multi-cultural no matter how easy it is to forget because of all the mind-numbing pretty. Just, just... asd;lfksjdfh ♥

And the rest... aaaaaah. Speechless, utterly speechless here.

;__; Also wishing you weren't anon.

nymous_fic November 26 2007, 01:47:18 UTC

HI. HI, I LOVE YOU.

And also, OMG I LOVE YOU.

*refrains from mashing her keyboard*

ABKLABKLKLSDBLKALFKA EFIAHGLA ALFLFAAFEAGBKLVABLAAB AIGHIAEFAILG LAI !!!!11

*fails rather spectacularly*

Thank you. So much. Like. So much. I--

Hibarimighthaveathingforblondes? *shot*

Oh, thank you~

(ah, i'm sorry. i'm so so so sorry.)

kasugai_gummie November 26 2007, 02:27:41 UTC

WOAH WHA--? XD; Don't know what I did to deserve so much keyboard-mashing love (♥!!) BUT UM HEY THAR! I LOVE YOU TOO?!! :D

I'dliketothinksotoo. And, you're very welcome! Teach me how to write like you~ T^T

nymous_fic November 26 2007, 09:32:12 UTC

ALABLBAEGBIAEG;OAEG;OAG;NA;NAG;;AGE;NLA;NLAE

You deserved more~

Ah-- and your writing is amazing! As is your art!

I HAVE NOTHING TO TEACH YOU EXCEPT MAYBE HOW TO CAPS A LOT, THOUGH THAT'S NOT REALLY A SKILL OR A TALENT.

*braindead*

kasugai_gummie November 29 2007, 07:54:02 UTC

Soooooo, three days later, I traipse back in--and, after being completely and utterly infuriated by my physics homework, kindasorta fled back to your fic for comfort. XD;

And comforting it was and asdlfkjsdfh just yesyesyes. Just wanted to let you know.

Also, YOU'RE TOO KIND. D: AND HUSH. CAPSING IS AN ARTFORM TO USE AND ABUSE IN STYLE. ♥

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