Crits/redline.

[nyliir]

I've been drawing up a profile of Nyliir. Since I've been working on her design a little lately.
I'd really like some harsh (but constructive!) crits or redlines. C:


I didn't draw the tail because I got bored halfway through. :E
Same story with her wing. Haha.

Anyway, any help is greatly appreciated! ;;
I might post it to my dA scraps later too. . . Hmmm. . .