Title: 001. Freefall Rating: G Pairing: Eeteuk/Kangin Archive: 001/100 Notes: I don't do angst, but this came out so well. One of the few fics I'm actually proud of.
Awn, sometimes when you try, and try harder to avoids something.. they come faster. Anyway, I like it. But now.. I need fluffy things cause my heart is aching for another fic that I've read few hours ago and.. and.... *pout* i don't wanna cry T___T! Keep working, I love how do you write! ^^
T.T Yeah.. That's the thing, Angst fic broke my heart TT_TT. Just an offtopic question, you have a fanfic based on the movie of the "Attack On The Pin-up Boys" I've read 3 or.. maybe 4? chapters of that, Does it have any continuation?? o.o? or Will you continue it?? :3!
Aww, this was good. Your Eeteuk made me happy. So did your Kangin. I've gotten my angsty Kangteuk for the day, thankyouverymuch. 8D
Eeteuk isn't sure if he's doing this for just the fans anymore.
IT ISN'T OH GO MARRY HIM NOW
and the intensity that is Kangin.
<333
and the loud roar in his ears of his own heart shattering bit by bit.
Lovely imagery~ =)
Eeteuk's ears are starting to ring because Kangin can be deafening when in close range.
YES OMG T_T Kangin~~~
He wonders idly between sobs if he's still freefalling, because it feels more like he's finally hit ground.
That's one of the main reasons I like this so much. That last sentence really concludes and rounds it, especially in correlation to the other "freefall" reference (whyyesI'manerd). It gives the entire thing a really comfortably smooth, round feel.
Wow... Angst is my specialty, and this mkaes me wanna cry....
He deserves it; every rebuke, every curse this one hurt...It remindsme of how I portrayed him in my fic Calendar...
It hurts more than a whip to the back; more than being boiled alive. Because it's not his body that's hurting, it's his heart. This line made my eyes tear up...
Finally Kangin leaves and Eeteuk falls to the floor, eyes filled with tears, dead hopes and unfulfillable dreams. He wonders idly between sobs if he's still freefalling, because it feels more like he's finally hit ground. And this is the line that made the tears fall like rivers....
So, you've made an angst writer cry with your angst. That makes it wonderfully written angst.^^
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Anyway, I like it. But now.. I need fluffy things cause my heart is aching for another fic that I've read few hours ago and.. and.... *pout* i don't wanna cry T___T!
Keep working, I love how do you write! ^^
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I don't like to write Angst because it makes me want to cry while I'm writing >.
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Just an offtopic question, you have a fanfic based on the movie of the "Attack On The Pin-up Boys"
I've read 3 or.. maybe 4? chapters of that, Does it have any continuation?? o.o? or Will you continue it?? :3!
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i don´t like angsty fics very much either but this one was really good:)
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I'm glad you liked it though!
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Eeteuk isn't sure if he's doing this for just the fans anymore.
IT ISN'T OH GO MARRY HIM NOW
and the intensity that is Kangin.
<333
and the loud roar in his ears of his own heart shattering bit by bit.
Lovely imagery~ =)
Eeteuk's ears are starting to ring because Kangin can be deafening when in close range.
YES OMG T_T Kangin~~~
He wonders idly between sobs if he's still freefalling, because it feels more like he's finally hit ground.
That's one of the main reasons I like this so much. That last sentence really concludes and rounds it, especially in correlation to the other "freefall" reference (whyyesI'manerd). It gives the entire thing a really comfortably smooth, round feel.
=D
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Angst is my specialty, and this mkaes me wanna cry....
He deserves it; every rebuke, every curse
this one hurt...It remindsme of how I portrayed him in my fic Calendar...
It hurts more than a whip to the back; more than being boiled alive. Because it's not his body that's hurting, it's his heart.
This line made my eyes tear up...
Finally Kangin leaves and Eeteuk falls to the floor, eyes filled with tears, dead hopes and unfulfillable dreams. He wonders idly between sobs if he's still freefalling, because it feels more like he's finally hit ground.
And this is the line that made the tears fall like rivers....
So, you've made an angst writer cry with your angst. That makes it wonderfully written angst.^^
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