I'm surprised no-one lost an eye! I totally commend you for taking on a moresome of this size. I can imagine that it's gotta be hard writing all those people ~doing the deed!
I particularly loved the hints that Puck's bound and determined to be better than anyone that ever touches her, and that Rachel wants to protect his ~pride, and the end ♥
It is hard. I kept forgetting about Kurt. Then wondered WTF was a gay guy doing paying all this attention to a girl. And I didn't want it to feel like Rach was being taken advantage of, either.
Of course Puck has to be the best! His girl is always well looked after, and he's The BAMF Stud. Even if he does share said girl with his friends, lol. The end is my fave, too. I'm actually now considering how I could write their scene - how he'd show her he's the best she's ever had after she'd had other guys.
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I think I may have to take another shower.
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I particularly loved the hints that Puck's bound and determined to be better than anyone that ever touches her, and that Rachel wants to protect his ~pride, and the end ♥
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Of course Puck has to be the best! His girl is always well looked after, and he's The BAMF Stud. Even if he does share said girl with his friends, lol. The end is my fave, too. I'm actually now considering how I could write their scene - how he'd show her he's the best she's ever had after she'd had other guys.
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