Betrayed - Page 1 (by daikinman) [Repost]
okay.. I'm sorry if I was late for posting this (kat, really sorry. >_<) but yeah, since daikinman left LJ, her entries were gone too. We saved this back-up copy of daikinman's entry which is really, really important (if I must stress) because daikinman is our first ever writer in this community and this page is the very first page we ever had. ^_^v
This is actually a good read. Whether you're reading this story for the first time, or re-reading it again... Honestly, it's just so interesting how people can sew things up like this. haha!
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Writer: daikinman
Main characters: Chinen Yuri and Murata Hirona
Guests: Hey Say 7 members, 9nine members, and Irie Jingi
Teaser: Murata Hirona was a 17 year old girl who has been in love with the most popular guy in school, Chinen Yuri, since middle school. Her "best friend", Kawashima Umika, was supposed to be helping her get closer to Yuri but one day when she came to school, she found out something surprising... Yuri and Umika started dating. Hirona was confused and also very hurt. What will she do now?
Hirona, Sayaka, Uki, and Kanae were walking to school together. Usually Umika was with them but today it was different.
"Hey guys where's Umika today?" Hirona asked
Sayaka and Kanae gave her an annoyed look.
"What?" she asked, confused?
"Didn't you hear what she did?" Uki asked, calm unlike the other two. Hirona shook her head.
"She's dating Chinen Yuri" Kanae rolled her eyes "I can't believe her! She knew you like him yet she still... UGH!! I'm gonna kill her"
"Hey calm down" Hirona patted her shoulder "I don't understand what you're saying... Why would Umika date Chinen-kun when she knows that I like him? I mean... We're best friends..."
"I know-"
"Oh I get it" Hirona smiled "You guys are just trying to trick me right?"
Sayaka pointed to the front gate, "See for yourself"
She turned to look and saw Yuri and Umika holding hands while smiling and talking to each other happily. Hirona's couldn't believe her eyes.
"Why...?"
"Because she's a freakn' traitor that's why!" Kanae yelled and angrily started to walk.
"B-but I thought she was trying to help me get closer to Chinen-kun?"
Sayaka scoffed "Well it looks like she was the one getting closer to him"
~
When the four girls walked into the class they saw Umika turn to look at them and smirked after seeing Hirona's disappointed face. She turned around and continued talking to Yuri and his friends.
"I hate her" Uki rolled her eyes. They walked to the back of the classroom where they usually sat.
"You should do something in return" Sayaka said as she placed her bag in her seat.
"You should steal him away" Kanae suggested
"No you know what? Forget Chinen" Hirona said "There are plenty of hot guys out there! I don't know what I saw in him"
"Yeah if he's the type of person to fall for such a girl he is not a great guy" Uki agreed.
"Yeah I don't even know why he was an option" Kanae rolled her eyes.
"I will find someone better. Maybe older and more mature" Hirona said, sounding determined. Although deep down she was very heart-broken. Not only did she just lose one of her best friends but she also lost the hope of being with her crush since middle school.
Sayaka noticed Hirona's sad looked and held her hand "You don't have to find someone new immediately"
"Yeah take your time Hiro" Kanae smiled.
"Thanks guys" She smiled "It's better to just forget him already right?"
The three nodded.
"I don't want you to be hurt" Uki said.
Right then the teacher entered the class.
"Everyone get into your seats" the teacher ordered. "Today is the first day of school and you guys are second year students now"
"Way to speak the obvious" Kanae mumbled.
"So today I would like to start homeroom by choosing class representatives. We need two people. Those two will go to meeting every Monday after school and discuss how to make the school better with the other representatives from other classes. One will be doing most of the talking in the meeting while the other one takes notes and report it to me later. Your first meeting will be today"
All the students were either yawning, sleeping, doing their nails, looking in the mirror, or talking at this point.
"Would anyone like to volunteer?"
It was silent.
"If no one volunteers, I will have to choose two people myself" he 'warned'
"Why doesn't he just make the nerds do it?" Hirona rolled her eyes
"Thank you for volunteering Ms. Murata" the teacher smiled
"Uhm I didn'-"
"Okay another person"
"I'll do it" Uki, Kanae, and Sayaka raised their hands at the same time.
"I want a boy to do it" he said.
"Sexist" Kanae rolled her eyes.
"Hm... How about... Yamada?"
"Huh me?" Ryosuke pointed to himself "I have club activities after school"
"Morimoto?"
"I have baseball practice"
"Nakajima?"
"I tutor people on Mondays"
"Okamoto?"
"I have guitar lessons"
"Alright... How about" he looked around "Chinen! I know you don't do anything after school"
"NO!" Umika yelled.
"Kawashima I wasn't talking to you" the teacher said
Hirona stood up "Irie, I choose you!" she pointed to Irie Jingi who choked on his water, surprised.
"What am I, a Pokemon?"
"Irie was a class representative last year so he can't be this year" the teacher argued.
"Well if no one wants to do it then why can't he go?" Sayaka argued.
"I'll do it" Chinen said
The teacher smiled "Perfect"
"Kill me now" Hirona mumbled.
'This is not a good start to forgetting about him!' she thought
つづく
PS: Kat, I'm not really sure about the tags - so if there's any tags that i've missed, let me know. ^_^v
This is actually a good read. Whether you're reading this story for the first time, or re-reading it again... Honestly, it's just so interesting how people can sew things up like this. haha!
xXxXx
Writer: daikinman
Main characters: Chinen Yuri and Murata Hirona
Guests: Hey Say 7 members, 9nine members, and Irie Jingi
Teaser: Murata Hirona was a 17 year old girl who has been in love with the most popular guy in school, Chinen Yuri, since middle school. Her "best friend", Kawashima Umika, was supposed to be helping her get closer to Yuri but one day when she came to school, she found out something surprising... Yuri and Umika started dating. Hirona was confused and also very hurt. What will she do now?
Hirona, Sayaka, Uki, and Kanae were walking to school together. Usually Umika was with them but today it was different.
"Hey guys where's Umika today?" Hirona asked
Sayaka and Kanae gave her an annoyed look.
"What?" she asked, confused?
"Didn't you hear what she did?" Uki asked, calm unlike the other two. Hirona shook her head.
"She's dating Chinen Yuri" Kanae rolled her eyes "I can't believe her! She knew you like him yet she still... UGH!! I'm gonna kill her"
"Hey calm down" Hirona patted her shoulder "I don't understand what you're saying... Why would Umika date Chinen-kun when she knows that I like him? I mean... We're best friends..."
"I know-"
"Oh I get it" Hirona smiled "You guys are just trying to trick me right?"
Sayaka pointed to the front gate, "See for yourself"
She turned to look and saw Yuri and Umika holding hands while smiling and talking to each other happily. Hirona's couldn't believe her eyes.
"Why...?"
"Because she's a freakn' traitor that's why!" Kanae yelled and angrily started to walk.
"B-but I thought she was trying to help me get closer to Chinen-kun?"
Sayaka scoffed "Well it looks like she was the one getting closer to him"
~
When the four girls walked into the class they saw Umika turn to look at them and smirked after seeing Hirona's disappointed face. She turned around and continued talking to Yuri and his friends.
"I hate her" Uki rolled her eyes. They walked to the back of the classroom where they usually sat.
"You should do something in return" Sayaka said as she placed her bag in her seat.
"You should steal him away" Kanae suggested
"No you know what? Forget Chinen" Hirona said "There are plenty of hot guys out there! I don't know what I saw in him"
"Yeah if he's the type of person to fall for such a girl he is not a great guy" Uki agreed.
"Yeah I don't even know why he was an option" Kanae rolled her eyes.
"I will find someone better. Maybe older and more mature" Hirona said, sounding determined. Although deep down she was very heart-broken. Not only did she just lose one of her best friends but she also lost the hope of being with her crush since middle school.
Sayaka noticed Hirona's sad looked and held her hand "You don't have to find someone new immediately"
"Yeah take your time Hiro" Kanae smiled.
"Thanks guys" She smiled "It's better to just forget him already right?"
The three nodded.
"I don't want you to be hurt" Uki said.
Right then the teacher entered the class.
"Everyone get into your seats" the teacher ordered. "Today is the first day of school and you guys are second year students now"
"Way to speak the obvious" Kanae mumbled.
"So today I would like to start homeroom by choosing class representatives. We need two people. Those two will go to meeting every Monday after school and discuss how to make the school better with the other representatives from other classes. One will be doing most of the talking in the meeting while the other one takes notes and report it to me later. Your first meeting will be today"
All the students were either yawning, sleeping, doing their nails, looking in the mirror, or talking at this point.
"Would anyone like to volunteer?"
It was silent.
"If no one volunteers, I will have to choose two people myself" he 'warned'
"Why doesn't he just make the nerds do it?" Hirona rolled her eyes
"Thank you for volunteering Ms. Murata" the teacher smiled
"Uhm I didn'-"
"Okay another person"
"I'll do it" Uki, Kanae, and Sayaka raised their hands at the same time.
"I want a boy to do it" he said.
"Sexist" Kanae rolled her eyes.
"Hm... How about... Yamada?"
"Huh me?" Ryosuke pointed to himself "I have club activities after school"
"Morimoto?"
"I have baseball practice"
"Nakajima?"
"I tutor people on Mondays"
"Okamoto?"
"I have guitar lessons"
"Alright... How about" he looked around "Chinen! I know you don't do anything after school"
"NO!" Umika yelled.
"Kawashima I wasn't talking to you" the teacher said
Hirona stood up "Irie, I choose you!" she pointed to Irie Jingi who choked on his water, surprised.
"What am I, a Pokemon?"
"Irie was a class representative last year so he can't be this year" the teacher argued.
"Well if no one wants to do it then why can't he go?" Sayaka argued.
"I'll do it" Chinen said
The teacher smiled "Perfect"
"Kill me now" Hirona mumbled.
'This is not a good start to forgetting about him!' she thought
つづく
PS: Kat, I'm not really sure about the tags - so if there's any tags that i've missed, let me know. ^_^v