YNLH: you're always owing for assassin_nariel

Jun 05, 2012 00:02

Recipient: assassin_nariel
Title: you’re always owing
Author: ozmissage
Characters: Tim, Raylan
Pairings: Tim/Raylan
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 2,632
Spoilers: Through the end of season 3.
Warnings: Violence
Disclaimer: Justified belongs to Elmore Leonard and Graham Yost. Title from Richard Siken’s “Wishbone.”
A/N: A big thank you to norgbelulah for betaing!
Summary: He knows ( Read more... )

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perdiccas June 5 2012, 09:48:32 UTC
Aw, I really enjoyed this although it made me a little sad for Tim. I like to believe that one day Raylan will make good on paying back his tab and then some, preferably with blow jobs. ;)

Great fic! ♥

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ozmissage June 6 2012, 22:28:47 UTC
Thank you, dear! <3

I really enjoyed this although it made me a little sad for Tim.

Heh. Me and my darn pining obsession. ;)

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afiakate June 5 2012, 14:12:26 UTC
Oh good, decent Tim, cleaning up Raylan's mess and cleaning up Raylan. I like how you've written Tim here - loyal, lonely, lusting after the hot mess that is Raylan Givens. What a bittersweet story. Love how it ends with the promise that more is possible, but not a certainty. Simply lovely.

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ozmissage June 7 2012, 01:27:59 UTC
Thank you so much! <3

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bleodswean June 5 2012, 15:29:59 UTC
Wonderful - just totally perfectly wonderful!!!! An enjoyable read! Your Tim voice is spot-on and I hope you continue to write the character! You've got a great insight into him and I totally buy this take - he's sad and funny and worth every moment you can get Raylan to spend with him! I would love to see this continue!

Great work on your back-and-forth dialogue between the two.

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ozmissage June 7 2012, 01:29:31 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so glad to hear Tim worked for you here. I have an epic amount of love for that guy. <3

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gwylliondream June 5 2012, 19:41:50 UTC
This was fantastic! Beautifully written.

Loved this: The slick slide of a sweating glass in his hand is more familiar than the sensation of being touched by another living, breathing human being.

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ozmissage June 7 2012, 01:30:00 UTC
Thank you! <333

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vegarin June 6 2012, 04:00:30 UTC
Oh wow, this is just gorgeous. Impeccably written, but with this organic feelings throughout that make the characters come alive. I think both Tim an Raylan are quite possibly two of the most difficult characters to capture with words, and you did just that.

Loved it. <3

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ozmissage June 7 2012, 01:31:22 UTC
Thank you so much for such a lovely comment! I'm so happy to hear the boys worked for you here. <333

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