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nvgvup

Worth Remembering

Mar 02, 2012 12:11

Title: Worth Remembering
Rating: K
Pairing: Adama/Roslin, Baltar
Word Count: 100
Author’s Note: Written for challenge No. 100: 100 in 100 on ar_drabbles. Takes place during 3:11 The Eye of Jupiter.
Disclaimer: It all belongs to Ronald D. Moore. He’s a very lucky man.

( in which Baltar realizes his mistake )

fanfic, drabble, bsg

Comments 10

marzipanilla March 2 2012, 21:03:19 UTC

Missed your chance, Gaius- but at least you can acknowledge that.

Interesting moment to draw back on.

nvgvup March 2 2012, 21:32:57 UTC

I know Gauis is mostly too self-absorbed to stop and think about Laura, but I've been toying with this quote of Laura's and how her & Gauis' relationship changes over the arc of the show. I've got a much longer fic in the works but stole this little snippet for the drabble challenge.

akachankami March 3 2012, 01:34:33 UTC

*O*
i love this idea!
The Admiral who has made her beautiful. Who has noticed her fearful radiance when I was too blind
*O*
that is so perfect! and the last line! that's gaius! back to his selfish self =D
i loved this! brill idea =)

nvgvup March 3 2012, 19:20:52 UTC

Thank you! Yes, Baltar does make everything about himself but I wanted, for one moment, to have him realize how wrong he'd once been :p

larsfarm77 March 3 2012, 04:12:51 UTC

This is such a great twist on what Laura says (and Gaius' reaction in the mini) -- fantastic!

nvgvup March 3 2012, 19:22:25 UTC

Thank you! I've been toying with this Roslin line for awhile. I've got something larger brewing in terms of Baltar's reaction and hopefully someday I'll finish it!

afrakaday March 3 2012, 06:14:03 UTC

Gaius' POV! Too clever! This is awesome all around, but --the Admiral who has made her beautiful-- shippy sigh. :)

nvgvup March 3 2012, 19:23:32 UTC

I'm glad that line elicited a shippy sigh! Laura was always a beautiful woman but I really believe her relationship with Bill - professionally and personally - helped her come into her own.

redrockcan March 3 2012, 20:08:58 UTC

Ooh you always write something different and intriguing. Interesting choice of that line and Gauis' reaction. My bleak future in her Admiral's hands. Great line in a great drabble!!

nvgvup March 3 2012, 20:52:20 UTC

you always write something different and intriguing
I'm always afraid, when I get an idea, that it'll have been written before. My penance for coming into fandom so late is I have work extra hard to come up with something relatively new!

Glad you liked that line. I suppose his future ended up being rather entertaining, but at this moment he had little reason to be hopeful.