Flowers of Fire for Linstock

[pathsforme]

Author's name: pathsforme
Written for: linstock
Pairing/characters: Spock/Uhura
Rating: PG
Prompt: You can make blossom in me, Flowers of fire. ("Soaring Clouds HUANG O (1498-1569))
Warnings: Fluff. Also this is my very first Star Trek fanfiction I've written.
Disclaimer: Star Trek is property of Gene Roddenberry.

Comments

[tprillahfiction]

I really love this character piece. You did a great job with the prompt! Very beautifully written! Congrats on your first Star Trek fic--please write more!

Good work

[linstock]

“Spock was stubborn, fiercely so.” That does to seem to a trait many author have emphasised about Spock! I like how you try to show the complexity of Spock’s feelings and also their non-humanness… “What he felt when in her presence was layers of love, passion, desire, loyalty, friendship, and things that could not be explained in the human language.” Nice touch with the shower; poor Spock, doomed to always have cold showers, I suppose there is some sort of energy saving heat limiter on the hot water system! I like the touch of Spock!Prime, and a good thing that Spock followed his advise. Awww…such a sweet ending too. A great fill Thanks.

[acacia_123]

great story
this was awesome