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numptysmeg

Remember me [1/1]

Feb 27, 2011 00:02

Title: Remember me
Pairing: Junseung
Genre: Fluff/Tradgedy/Drama/Angst
Rating: pg13
Summary: Junhyung spends several months trying to work up the courage to talk to the handsome jogger he sees in Namsan park but one day he stops running and Junhyung finds out why

( Hyunseung is still just as beautiful as he remembered from the park. Of course he’d never tell him that. Hyunseung would have the nurses throw him out if he did )

junseung, pairing: hyunseung/junhyung, rating: pg13

Comments 21

brettan February 27 2011, 00:44:44 UTC

I really liked this :) Just the right amount of cute. And I was so worried he was gonna die at the end xD Don't apologise, at least not to me, I loved it :D

numptysmeg February 27 2011, 12:16:52 UTC

Thank you ~~<3

I can't kill Hyunseung >.

animefan961 February 27 2011, 00:56:01 UTC

When I first read that Hyunseung was getting thinner part I thought this was the eating disorder fic you mentioned a while ago. I still loved this though. Things didn't go the way Junhyung initially wanted but they're still together in the end. <3

numptysmeg February 27 2011, 12:18:39 UTC

~~~~~~~~~~~<3
Thank you

I keep meaning to retry the eating disorder fic. I did start it and it was nearly finished. I had this pre-smut scene which was really good >,< but then my beta was like PFFT I hate the idea and things went a bit down hill.

I think I'm too much of a sucker for a happy ending haha

akinoyui February 27 2011, 05:36:23 UTC

For a moment, I thought you were gonna kill Hyunseung but towards the end, I was kinda glad. Although there is still a possibility that Hyunseung will not be able to survive but I think with Junhyung by his side, Hyunseung will have the courage and strength to continue. Ah ~ I was just thinking this morning, in bed...what if one of them has a sickness or something, what will they do? I guess I was watching a similar movie and that question just popped up in my mind..and I sure am glad that you wrote this!! I like it so so much! I would really like to believe that Hyunseung will get through it and stay with Junhyung forever.

Oh, I like your first few paragraphs where you described the different seasons and how Hyunseung wore different clothes AND Junhyung list of things he dislikes. I find that totally amusing ^^

Thanks for posting this up bb!!

numptysmeg February 27 2011, 12:20:46 UTC

Thank you ~~~~~~~~~<3

There's no way I could kill Hyunseung off. He's my beast bias and 2nd over all bias so I couldn't bring myself to do it (Plus my beta would have killed me if I had) haha

Junhyung will take good caare of him, I'm sure :D

minnies_0735 February 27 2011, 05:52:45 UTC

I loved this so much <3 Everything about it~ I'm so glad Hyunseung didn't die in the end >< and omgsh NCIS! Is it that episode where Ziva sees that running man who ends up in the hospital because of poisoning or something like that? I'm sure it is... I think ._. At least thats what I was thinking about while I was reading this :] How Junhyung notices the clothes Hyunseung wears and how they change with the seasons, and the hat :] I love the ending and could totally imagine Junhyung flailing at a duck getting to close to them. So cute~ And the part where Hyunseung tells him he has something to live for gave me such a warm happy feeling~

numptysmeg February 27 2011, 12:23:28 UTC

Somebody gets cake and cookies~~~~~~~~~~~~<3

It was indeed Ziva's running man who had been poisoned.

My mum loves NCIS so I was sort of watching it while reading and updating stuff and was like :o that would be a totally cute story... if maybe the the guy didn't die at the end but you never know for sure if he did because they just left it in the park with him asking if she'd have remembered him though the fact they didn't get together and you never see him again makes me think he probably didn't. I'd like to think he did though

minnies_0735 February 27 2011, 18:20:06 UTC

OMG yay!!! I love cake and cookies *-* so yummy~ My dad loves NCIS so I sometimes watch with him and I agree it was such a cute story and I also like to think he didn't die. And that Seung gets better so he and Junhyung can go running together :]

vennarashii February 27 2011, 09:22:04 UTC

THANK GOD FOR THE NONE ANGST ENDING. LOL.
I can't read junseung with sad endings, but since you wrote it i gave it a go and YIPPEEE no sad endings! :D
and why does stories like these have a little specialty to it? i mean, stories where one of the characters has a deathly sickness or something LOL. :)

love you and love this ♥♥

numptysmeg February 27 2011, 12:25:44 UTC

Thank you ~~~~~~<3

Ha I'm too much of a sap to write a sad ending. Junseung should always end up together in stories. Always. I think it's the whole caring for someone thing.. I find that quite endearing anyways so when it's deathly-serious it's like omg they're so committed *sobbing to self*