Comments | numb3rs100: Prompt#030: Secret: "Office Chat" (edited)

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Prompt#030: Secret: "Office Chat" (edited)

Feb 07, 2008 02:25

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jelsemium February 7 2008, 17:55:54 UTC

I like this series, but you kind of lost me here. It's not obvious to me who is saying what. I had to read it several times to follow the conversation. (Not that reading it several times is a bad thing, mind you.)

rodlox February 7 2008, 22:24:45 UTC

*edited*

sorry.

jelsemium February 7 2008, 23:30:54 UTC

Thanks!