Past Prompt #37: Resistance...

[mustangcandi]

Title: Closer...
Pairing/Characters: Colby/OFC, David
Rating: PG
Summary: He continues to ponder the possibilities...
Word Count: 300
Spoilers: none
Notes/Warnings: Part 6/33 in The Sparkling Series. I promise, after this...it's back to 100 word challenges. :) Comments and criticisms are always welcome. (Many thanks to my beta: julietm...MWAH!)

Comments

[julietm]

OMG! YAY!! What kind of lottery did my heart just win?? haha

Love love love it!!!

[mustangcandi]

haha...damn woman! You're quick on the draw. But I love you for it. *hugs*

I don't think this would be nearly as much fun if you didn't like them so much. *squishes*

[julietm]

well, to be honest...I don't like them...

I LOVE THEM!!!!!!!!!!! :P

[mustangcandi]

God love ya...I know I do. *smishes*

[magisterequitum]

Yay!! And she blushed. Colby with that naughty mouth of yours.

Oh my gosh. You just put my little series to shame. Seriously.

Bad David! ;)

[mustangcandi]

I had two different versions of this drabble...one with 200 words, another with 250. The first had his naughty mouth, the second had only him reaching for her and getting interrupted.

I wasn't happy with either alone so I combined them into this...mwahaha! Killed my word limit, but I still made it under 300. :)

As for putting your little series to shame, I wouldn't say that at all...I was just reading over your series and I really like it! Especially the last for Impatience. I can't believe Don waited that long. LOL. I'll comment when I go back and read it more carefully. :)

And yes, bad David. *shakes head* Come here Agent Sinclair. I will punish you. ^^ hehe.

[cerisereve]

He took a step closer, his voice lowering to little more than a whisper. “To be fair, most of the night I had my mouth full.”

I'm sorry, please leave a message. cerisereve is currently incoherent. *beep*

Oh...It was in the earlier drabble, but I really liked how you added the contract to fire with smoke and ash. Ash is one of thoes words I've always loved for some strange reason.

[mustangcandi]

hehe...I'm surprised more people haven't said something about Colby's naughty mouth there. LOL. I loved that line. It was smug and just the comment you wouldn't expect given the situation, but Callie clearly didn't mind. haha.

And I'm glad you liked the bit about smoke and ash. That was the part that followed this...and when I originally wrote it, it read "smoke and memory"...but I just didn't like that and knew there was a better word. Ash really is a great word and I'm glad it came to me in my time of need. That's why it took me all day to write the two drabbles (Closer, Surprises) because I sat on them a while and just let them incubate until I could get them right. I know you know what that's like. LOL.