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nuit2005

Celebration Part Two - Gold Top Mornings

Sep 18, 2007 22:54

Part Two..
Author: Nuit and Fourleaf Clover
Rating: Adult
Disclaimer: I certainly didn’t invent Steven Shaw or Joe Byrne of course. These are pure wild imaginings for which no one would pay me, even if I asked them. Apologies to David Storey for borrowing his difficult and emotionally restrained character. Joe I think is used to me taking liberties ( Read more... )

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unplugged32 September 19 2007, 11:58:33 UTC

WOW!! What an incredible piece! You got the atmosphere, the setting so perfect (I've read the play!) it could have been a moment in time, maybe just before the Celebration (since we know he quits his book by then) it is simply brilliant!! Can't wait to read more:)

nuit2005 September 25 2007, 20:52:59 UTC

thanks! I am glad it rang true, yeah thats what I thought- just before the play. Iam so glad you like it.

bluerowan69 October 1 2007, 04:16:39 UTC

Interesting concept for a set of stories.

This part is my favorite, so I'm replying here. The scenes that you have created here are quite memorable - make me think about the story long after I'm off the computer. Joe going through the dreariness of Steven's life. I didn't see In Celebration but you make me wish I had.

nuit2005 October 1 2007, 08:47:56 UTC

thank you Blue! I found that myself about the play- it lingered long and sort of grew in impostance, in what it was saying, beyond the initial viewing. Glad you liked the little story, a bit 'out there' but all the same..
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