Also abstaining due to personal bias. *g* Jesse's one of my oldest friends and one of the first people I RPed with, so I don't feel I can be impartial.
Not only am I familiar with the canon, but it's one of my favorites.
The background DOES check out, and I know the difficulty of writing one in which the story involves conflicting political powers and such. It doesn't have things detail for detail, but in the same way that Pixie was able to summarize Harry Potter's seven books in a fairly compact but encompassing manner, that's how this background strikes me. There were some embellishing descriptions that made it less concise and a little harder to get through or understand, and I don't know how others who aren't as familiar will handle it.
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However, I will clarify that the personality and background checks out. The dream is also downright gorgeous, in my opinion. Very symbolic.
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The background DOES check out, and I know the difficulty of writing one in which the story involves conflicting political powers and such. It doesn't have things detail for detail, but in the same way that Pixie was able to summarize Harry Potter's seven books in a fairly compact but encompassing manner, that's how this background strikes me. There were some embellishing descriptions that made it less concise and a little harder to get through or understand, and I don't know how others who aren't as familiar will handle it.
The ability descriptions are good, too.
I vote Yay.
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