Can I just ask - about the dream - on a scale of 1 to 10, how much canon info is it actually giving? With 1 being Lucid and 10 being Acid Trippy. I just worry because her first dream was 565 words ( when Seven was accepted before) and this one is 2,952 words. For comparison's sake, I'll point out that Smoke's birth dream was 489 words and his rebirth dream was 1,740 words. The difference with the second dream is that only about 1/3 of it is lucid canon info. If the same is true for Seven's birth dream, then all's well.
I trust Ish with the character, since the personality checks out for me and I trust canon to you guys, but I just had to bring that up because it was bothering me.
That and the thing I said on the previous Naruto apps: leaving out canon definitions, in this case specifically genjutsu. There was a lot of redundancy in the Abilities section, but that's mostly a pet peeve since I realize the info's all there and that's the important thing.
The only problem I have with Ish's dream is she mentions "shinobi" in there once, which I'll be asking her to remove.
As for abilities, she calls genjutsu "Illusions" later in the same paragraph, though not by actively saying "genjutsu = illusions". I think for the purpose of what we need an abilities section for--that is, only our own reference, and to show they have a basic understanding of character skills--then it's fine.
I don't know canon but provided our Naruto mods approve it I have no problem with this app - it's well written, and I remember Ish from her last play here. I was sad she had to go then, and glad to see she wants to come back.
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Hell yes.
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I trust Ish with the character, since the personality checks out for me and I trust canon to you guys, but I just had to bring that up because it was bothering me.
That and the thing I said on the previous Naruto apps: leaving out canon definitions, in this case specifically genjutsu. There was a lot of redundancy in the Abilities section, but that's mostly a pet peeve since I realize the info's all there and that's the important thing.
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As for abilities, she calls genjutsu "Illusions" later in the same paragraph, though not by actively saying "genjutsu = illusions". I think for the purpose of what we need an abilities section for--that is, only our own reference, and to show they have a basic understanding of character skills--then it's fine.
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Yes
(what the hell self)
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