Comments | novembersmith: Fic: The Anatomy of a Fall (MCR, Frank/Gerard, 3/12)

novembersmith

Fic: The Anatomy of a Fall (MCR, Frank/Gerard, 3/12)

Jun 17, 2010 13:08

aoaf, bandombigbang, long as hell, fic, frank/gerard

Comments 10

toucanpie June 19 2010, 17:33:06 UTC

Oh my god, why did I not pester you to read bits of this while you were writing it? *____* pirated Disney DVD empire!, Mikey left the toaster on!, Frank doesn't want to be alone for long :( :(, NURSE CATNIP, "How lucky I’ve got a big strong man like you to teach me." (ahahahaha). I have to pause reading now because Dr Who is on shortly and I am resenting that. I NEVER RESENT DR WHO.

neon_footprint June 30 2010, 11:00:48 UTC

Greta!!!

Ok, I should probably stop commenting with names now :D

Your observation is incredible. You have this delicate eye for detail, and an elegant way of making it all exist on the page without sounding like you're trying too hard. This is masterful work.

novembersmith July 1 2010, 18:05:53 UTC

Dude, you are... wow, thank you, you are just so incredibly lovely for saying so. I'm beyond touched, that is a wonderful compliment.

neon_footprint July 2 2010, 09:00:29 UTC

You deserve it, petal. You always deserve it. You are one of the very few people whose styles I would emulate if I could ♥

aillychan August 5 2010, 06:07:15 UTC

I am totally digging this! Frank kind of has a Tam Lin vibe going on, although I think it'll probably turn more definitively ghost-like eventually. (But imagining Frank as Tam Lin and Gerard as Janet has me gleeful.)

Very excited to see where this is going!

novembersmith August 7 2010, 20:57:34 UTC

...omg, that is a DELIGHTFUL vibe and a delicious crossover idea, and I am definitely tickled Frank's got that going on! Hope you enjoyed, and thanks for the comment. *G*

yawdrareg November 22 2010, 02:54:16 UTC

ghost frank fades if he's outside the forest! i LOVE it! awe, poor drunk miserable gerard, he make my heart ache. off to the next chapter!!!! love this fic SOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!

novembersmith December 1 2010, 02:20:34 UTC

YOU ARE SO LOVELY! These comments are make me dance with glee, no lie! *twirls you* Poor boys, tormented them so.

karen_jk January 8 2011, 01:10:42 UTC

"his voice was rough and had dead leaves in it, and clouds skittering across the sky, and the hollow sound of vast empty spaces."

You are made of win. what a mix of things this story is...teenaged high school life, ghostliness, and poetry like the line above.

I think I should get a tattoo of that line. ;)