Random: A Random Note on Writing from Barnes that Seemed Sensible

[novak]

One of the things you should try to avoid is having sentences where the verb is the verb "to be." This can lead to passive constructions -- very naughty! -- or just sentences that are confusing or long. Sometimes you write an "X is Y" sentence just to get the thought out, but you should go back and rewrite it. The occasion for this e-mail is what

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[aristotle2002]

How about, "Tertullian taught a low angelology, and criticised high alternatives."

And for God's sake get rid of the present tense.