Luke/Noah drabble for Ithilien

[nouveau_monday]

Prompt: Elevator

Comments

[barbaragail]

Oh God...

Poignant -
"Shh, shh. The Colonel isn't here. You're with me."

Sexy -
He swiped at the salty trails with the tip of his tongue.

Hot -
"I was all over you, had you pinned, no room for anything between the two of us, barely even space for breathing. My hand jacking you off. I don't remember you minding small spaces last night?"

Pure Love -
Luke sucks at Noah's neck, scrapes his teeth along his jaw. "So I'll just stay right here until the elevator starts moving again, okay. And you can remember how good it can be."

How do you do it? How do you knock me off my feet with so few words! I adore you! You know that I adore you, right?

[nouveau_monday]

*laughs*

i think your comments are almost as long as my drabble. you're so sweet.

[frances_veritas]

Oh God.

Noah bites his lip and whimpers. "Nngh"

Yeah. Basically. I've come to the conclusion that whenever you and Laura write anything, I forget how to use the English language. Yeah.

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[nouveau_monday]

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*kisses* i write these things in hopes to make you lose control of the english language.

[divainpink15]

This was just wonderful. Everything you've written has this way of playing SO clearly in my mind, and this was DEFINITELY no exception. And you have a really wonderful way of setting up the absolute smuttiest scenes EVER. :D

[nouveau_monday]

okay, so as you mentioned that it was smutty - let me ask you. what would you have rated this?

[divainpink15]

I agree with what you posted it under when you posted it at Luke/Noah [or was it the Hayloft? Regardless...], I think PG-13 works, with the NC-17 implications =)

[nouveau_monday]

oh good. That's why i didn't post it to the hayloft, because it wasn't precisely smutty, just implied smutty, y'know?

[qafaddiction]

Noah claustrophobic... interesting! Makes for a sexy drabble. Luke is a sweet boyfriend. Sorry, this is lame feedback. LOL In short: you write good! :P

[nouveau_monday]

There's this line in BtVS where Xander gets all confused and says "To read makes our speaking English good." What you said reminded me of that.

[shizumaslover]

I'm kind of beside myself right now. This plays to two of my biggest kinks: elevators and kissing/licking tears. I just... shit. This is so wonderful. I wish I could put it better than that.

[nouveau_monday]

some day, if you like elevators, i've got a story for you. Not yet, but someday.

[shizumaslover]

*flails*

[nouveau_monday]

there hasn't been anything happening in the elevator, it just centers around random (or not so random) meetings between the two boys. It's AU.