too much cold medicine, not enough sleep?

Apr 17, 2008 06:41

Fandom: Criminal Minds
Paring: Morgan/Reid
Rating: PG-13 for language/R for implied proposition
Warnings: None
Spoilers: Minor for "Elephant's Memory" - in that sense that it happens after that, but nothing from the episode itself.
Word Count: 655
AN: Yffy as always is the best date in the world for Criminal Minds. This comes from cold medicines, ( Read more... )

fic:apr08, drabble, fanfic, morgan/reid, criminal minds

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Comments 39

yffy April 17 2008, 11:05:23 UTC
Love love love LOVE!

But don't leave me hanging girl, give me MORE!!! :D

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nouveau_monday April 17 2008, 14:10:09 UTC
Holy Icon Love! I am so going to have to buy more icon space for this account. Or actually turn this into a paid account or something.

Do you like it? I wasn't sure if I had Morgan's voice or Reid's for that matter. Does everyone sound the same?

Would Reid say yes? Would Morgan propose this, even in a fic world? Clearly I need to find some Morgan/Reid fic.

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yffy April 22 2008, 12:30:33 UTC
I think it all sounds good so far babe! More! More! I think Reid would be all flustered for a while and flail a bit, but eventually give in and enjoy the hell out of himself!

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buffyaddict13 April 21 2008, 23:58:36 UTC
omg, i love your icon! is it possible i could snag it? i will love you long time.

*puppy eyes*

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penguinlady April 17 2008, 15:12:24 UTC
You definitely got Morgan's voice - I could hear it. Not sure about Reid, as he's not my fav character.

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nouveau_monday April 17 2008, 17:03:51 UTC
You don't like Reid?!?!?! How can you not love yourself some Reid? He's so wonderfully geeky! But really, you think that was Morgan's voice? Yay!

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penguinlady April 17 2008, 17:07:59 UTC
I think I'm more of a David Krumholtz/Charlie from Numb3rs kinda geek lovah. Reid is too awkward for me, and I don't like the "Reid is in trouble... again!" meme that happens with him. But Morgan? He can tackle me anytime! ;)

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nouveau_monday April 17 2008, 17:09:36 UTC
What I really want to see is Morgan tackle Garcia. That's what I want.

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buffyaddict13 April 22 2008, 00:00:25 UTC
okay. this is good. i like your writing style and i think you've got morgan down perfectly. i think you've got reid as well, and i'd love to see his reaction.

i'm working on a spn/cm fic right now from reid's pov, and so i'm always thinking from his point of view. this is the first fic i've read from someone who is not reid's pov.

very. nice.

*tips hat*

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nouveau_monday April 23 2008, 14:10:07 UTC
I forgot to ask - spn/cm crossover?!?!? is it gen or is there some pairing going on, and if so, whom?

i would love to have part of this be from Reid's point of view, but I don't know if I can get his voice down. I need to nerd up my vocab for him. (Which could be fun, but still is somewhat intimidating.)

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buffyaddict13 April 23 2008, 14:27:37 UTC
sorry, it's gen. ;-P

and i'm having a hard time writing from reid's pov. i'm never going to complain about writing for the winchesters again. my problem is reid is SO smart i feel totally daunted. it's hard to write a character that's a billion times smarter than i am. *perseveres*

and i know what you mean about icons. i have a paid account WITH AN ADD ON and i still want more icons! *fails*

have a great day.

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nouveau_monday April 23 2008, 18:38:39 UTC
gen + cm/spn can still be of the yay. but sam + reid also of the yay. my reid problem is with vocabulary, but specifically when to spout off strange psych theories and why. I don't want them to sound stupid, but they definitely give a good break up point in the story ... not break up as in not-dating, but break up, as in interruption.

you are icon obsessed! i'm so impressed.

have an awesome day yourself.

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harknessgirl April 22 2008, 20:44:47 UTC
This was really good. Are you doing more?? I hope so. I am a reid/Hotch fan but I am starting to slide towards Reid and Morgan. You moved me a little closer.

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nouveau_monday April 23 2008, 14:08:25 UTC
thank you muchly.

I'm actually thinking that I'll turn this into a full story of smutty goodness, because apparently all i'm good for on this LJ is writing dirty dirty boysmut :)

it's the first time i've ever written something that isn't As The World Turns; Luke & Noah. It's a new experience.

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poisontaster April 23 2008, 22:10:58 UTC
Oh, I don't know how I missed this! Or...actually, I do. At the time you posted it, I hadn't seen "Elephant's Memory" yet. But I do think you got the voices just right. Eerily right. I can totally hear them saying the words. *nods* Now moar, pls.

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nouveau_monday April 23 2008, 22:34:25 UTC
*giggles* does it make me a complete and total dork to be all fangirly that you responded? well, regardless, you made my day by saying that. *gets all shy and stupid* you really think the voices worked?

I actually wrote more of this yesterday while I waited for my therapy appointment. I fear that much like with my luke/noah stuff i have a lot of build up and talking and then i'm not always sure the pay off is worth it. *shrugs* we'll see where it goes. There's definitely more of it now. And there will be more tonight.

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poisontaster April 23 2008, 22:37:51 UTC
I'm a very aural person. I can totally get thrown out of a story if it doesn't sound right and I meant it when I said I could hear the actors saying your lines. I think you got it exactly right.

I haven't read any of your Luke/Noah stuff, really, since it's not my fandom...and I feel sort of pretentious making the offer, but I write BETTER when I can talk it out with other people...so if you ever wanted someone to run things past and see if it makes sense outside your head, I'd be happy to.

I'm looking forward to what comes next!

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nouveau_monday April 23 2008, 23:51:06 UTC
okay, #1 do not at all feel pretentious offering to read my stuff because seriously the fact that you would makes me all fluttery. (big fangirl of yours, right here, did i mention that? it's merepersiflage's fault.)

I'd definitely be in to talking stuff out. I need to go read Psych books or Crime Theory or something to make my Reid sound suitably nerdy. Not that I'm not nerdy, but in an English teacher kind of way, not a criminalist Ph.D kind of way.

Right now Morgan was just getting pissy at a bartender for honing in on his potential Reid-snogging and remembering a conversation with Garcia.

In my perfect worlds it would be a threesome of garcia/morgan/reid. but i don't think i'm ready to write that. i'm still working my way through the things boys do between just two of them, let alone adding in a third person.

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