A Story of a Man & his Turtle' (Chapter 1)

Feb 10, 2011 21:55

Title: A story of a man and his turtle (1 ( Read more... )

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dld_ftw February 11 2011, 05:13:46 UTC
OMG! LMAO! You did it!

I loved "his turtles, Xabi and Stevie Jr" and the frantic Fernando/calm Stevie discussion:

“But he’s never done that before, why today?”

“Why do turtles do anything Fernando?”

::guffaws::

Well, now we need to pity Nando! He's no traitor - he did it for Horsey!

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notoriousjk February 11 2011, 05:19:46 UTC
damn girl that was fast. I told you I would do it, I wouldn't comment on a website about it, if I had no intention of following through.

I swear i've never laughed so much writing something.

Wait till you see how much Fernando has to sacrifice to get Horsey back, you will definitely feel sorry for him ;-P

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kissmecait17 February 11 2011, 05:20:54 UTC
It’s not like he made a big deal about Horsey, or brought him to practice, like Stevie did.
OH MY GOSH STEVIE TAKING THEM TO PRACTICE.

“Sure, why not, Jamie’s gone; I’ll bring him back out. He likes other people, like his dad.”
I love that Horsey is like Sergio. It makes me cry with happiness.

“So Sergio finally found something you liked hmmm? I hope Jamie didn’t scare you. “
Can we talk for a minute about how much I love that Fernando speaks to Horsey? I feel like that just proves his attachment and obvious devotion to Horsey.

Horsey who is probably all alone, and scared, and……hopefully still alive.
I am so worried for Horsey, you know how I get about him.

I LOVE THIS CRACK!FIC. They can blame me all they want. I WILL TAKE THE BLAME.

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notoriousjk February 11 2011, 06:43:14 UTC
I wrote that line for you.....the one about Horsey being like his dad.

Of course Stevie can bring his turtles to practice, he is the captain of the team after all ;-P

It's kind of ridiculous and hilarious how attached I've become to "Horsey"...omg this fic, no one is going to take me seriously, and its going to be all your fault. ;-)

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kissmecait17 February 11 2011, 17:46:03 UTC
I am so attached to Horsey it's embarrassing. I am scared for him. And, as you know, I identify with him in a weird way.
I TAKE THE BLAME. Haha

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notoriousjk February 11 2011, 17:57:47 UTC
Horsey is the most adorable & spoiled turtle that ever live (in fiction)

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wh_mermaid February 11 2011, 06:32:39 UTC
... oh. my. god.

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I love you so much right now. This is just so much win. SO. MUCH. EPIC. WIN.

“Why Horsey? I mean he’s obviously not a horse.”
“I named him after his dad.”
“You don’t look like a horse.”

I almost died reading that. Seriously.

I <3 you so much right now

... )

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notoriousjk February 11 2011, 06:48:37 UTC
ha ha KERMIT!!!! Please use this gif more often, the world does not have enough of the green one in their lives ;-P Now I totally have this song in my head, not a bad song to have in your head I must say.

I'm glad you enjoyed, I thought it would be a welcome break from all the drama, I mean the whole thing was calling for crack fic ;-P I still can't believe I'm the one that started a fic based on it.

thank you for commenting <333

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kylijah February 11 2011, 08:18:22 UTC
I laughed, I cried, I got scared, I got angry and I learnt something deep... “Why do turtles do anything Fernando?”

Giiirl, AMAZING!

Now, you broke my heart too: "When he and Olalla separated" WHAT! Oh, right... :-/

Hehehehe. I want chapter 2!

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notoriousjk February 11 2011, 17:24:40 UTC
ha ha yes leave it to Steven Gerrard to say something "deep".

Olalla wouldn't let him have turtles :-( lol, idk it just made sense, you'll see later.

I have to write chapter 2, I had no idea people would actually enjoy it this much

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kylijah February 11 2011, 18:29:26 UTC
Ah I had had my suspicions for a long time that Olalla was too good to be true.

Anyway, I hope Horsey is okay. I do worry. Not gonna sleep until he is reunited with his daddy :-/

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elizaberglund February 11 2011, 09:26:55 UTC
I love turtles! I had one when I was a kid too!

Horsey! I must admit I hate when poeple call Sergio a horse but here it is somehow cte ... in a way.

Can't wait for second part!

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notoriousjk February 11 2011, 17:22:23 UTC
ha ha yeah I know I do too, but 'Horsey' seemed to fit, and was just ridiculous enough for this fic.

thank you & I'm glad you enjoyed.

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