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Declarations of Love (1/1)

Feb 03, 2012 16:36

Title: Declarations of Love
Author: tromana
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Jane/Lisbon
Summary: Jane wants to try and win over Lisbon in a very unique way. She's not impressed.
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Spoilers: Very minor for season 4.
Notes: Written for 15genres1prompt. Genre: crack. Also for mentalistprompt: table G (cat and mouse) and for the Paint It Red February monthly challenge. Phew! ( Read more... )

character: teresa lisbon, pairing: jane/lisbon, project: monthly challenges, fandom: the mentalist, fic: oneshot, project: 15 genres, character: patrick jane

Comments 8

little_firestar February 3 2012, 19:47:07 UTC

just a couple of words:jane wouldn't be jane if he was normal... quoting rigsby, he makes problem, causes caos, and then finds a solution!

tromana February 3 2012, 19:53:25 UTC

Yep, that sounds about right. :-)

sirenofodysseus February 3 2012, 19:58:23 UTC

Can Jane be my stalker? Hahaha. I can just imagine Jane hiding in Lisbon's closet, and looking at all her clothes. Or walking into the bathroom to change for yoga (actually, just thinking of Jane going to a yoga class is the highlight of my reading!day. I wonder how Van Pelt took him showing up.)

In some countries, I'm sure stalking is a term of endearment.
In other countries, I'm sure stalking is how you get arrested.

You made me laugh so hard, and it was a laugh I actually needed. You've also give me some minor insight on how I write my crack piece now, but I probably should go tempt fluff before I tempt crack. :D

surrender works very well as a prompt, doesn't it?

tromana February 12 2012, 19:31:45 UTC

Yes, Jane can be your stalker. I'll allow it because I say so. I think my favourite one was the concept of Jane + yoga too. Maybe at some point I should consider expanding upon that scene, hmm...

I'm also glad that this helped a little. <3

and yes, yes it is.

ranger_girl0301 February 4 2012, 16:37:19 UTC

Grins! So Jane. Great work!

tromana February 20 2012, 13:35:20 UTC

Glad you thought it worked! Thank you! <3

miss_peg February 6 2012, 11:28:53 UTC

Oh how wonderful...and silly and fun and...perfect example of crack. Oh Jane, you crack me up - get it, crack - yeah, not very funny, I know. Haha. Anywho...I just love the strange places that Jane literally appeared in, her car is probably the most normal, or perhaps the desk. Her closet, however, on what planet is that a suitable way to woo somebody Mr Jane? Haha. Love it.

tromana February 20 2012, 13:43:34 UTC

Catching up with review replies. Yayness! I'm glad you thought it was a good example of crack; I really wasn't sure how to approach the genre and though I can do comedy, it wasn't what I felt like writing. It's more subtle crack than crack-crack I guess, but I did have fun thinking of more and more bizarre places for Jane to randomly appear.