doti in the hizzouze!!!

[notalwaysthere]

ok, so i have been havin really bad writers block, and i want to finish this peom...

I aint got much to smile bout//but i got you//and that enough for me//i dont need sun shiney days//all i need is your face//when im about to cry// i think of yo eyes//and all i can do is smile

so all my poets in the house, please please PLEASE! make some

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hey....

[whitwhit08]

well. first of all. is it supposed to rhyme or not? because it doesn't. ha. but i mean.. it's ok. : )
♥

Re: hey....

[notalwaysthere]

think lyrics and rythem...i remembered that when i started to write it it was a song....

[__tootzieroll]

Well it depends on if it's free verse or rhyming. It seems as if your either rhyming, or your not. But it's real good so far otherwise.

[notalwaysthere]

its more of a song to tell the truth....

[notalwaysthere]

love ur icon btw...

[ooexodusoo]

It needs some work but it's looking pretty good. I don't think all poems have to rhyme. If you don't feel like rhyming then don't. I think I know who this poem is about. *wink* *wink* (me) Just kidding...

[notalwaysthere]

its more of a song to tell the truth....