Comments | notaboutthefish: In Time: At the End

not_a_zatarc in notaboutthefish

In Time: At the End

Apr 15, 2010 11:46

Title: At the End
Summary: Side by side at the end of it all…
Timeframe: AU, any
Characters/Pairing: Sam/Jack
Genre: Apocafic, angst, tragedy, drabble
Word Count: 100
Rating: G

( At the End )

tragedy, angst, au, series: in time, apocafic, drabble, samjack

Comments 10

regularamanda April 15 2010, 16:19:55 UTC

GUH! You go from happy!marriage life to this...my poor shippy heart!

It was soooo good...I want to read more! :D

not_a_zatarc April 15 2010, 17:15:26 UTC

lol. This one's been on the tip of my brain for a little while now. :P

zinke April 15 2010, 16:46:24 UTC

Really loved the way you wrote this: As long as his days continue to begin and end with her.

So sad, but lovely.

not_a_zatarc April 15 2010, 17:15:48 UTC

Thank you. :) Glad you enjoyed it.

julimond1402 April 15 2010, 17:02:03 UTC

Yeesh! Can this *be* more angsty? But lovely all the same :) I love Jack's faith in things and people he loves.

not_a_zatarc April 15 2010, 17:16:09 UTC

:D Glad you think so. Thanks. :)

thothmes April 16 2010, 07:29:50 UTC

Yeah, Jack would be able to carry on, if he has her. Trouble is, I'm not entirely convinced it would work the other way around. I think she'd have trouble letting it go, both intellectually and emotionally. But Jack's abiding faith is a warming ember here in a cold world.

not_a_zatarc April 16 2010, 13:51:44 UTC

Heh, yeah. And that's probably why I can't make this longer, 'cuz I don't think it would work in the long run. Well, maybe, but it'd be really tough.

taikowinds April 18 2010, 19:55:13 UTC

Poignant, heartcrushing...lovely.

not_a_zatarc April 19 2010, 01:31:12 UTC

Thank you. :)