Torchwood fic: 'Wants' Jack/Ianto NC-17

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Title: Wants
Fandom: Torchwood
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Warnings: Spanking, D/S, Toys, Rimming
Rating: NC-17, 7,600 words
A/N: This is the followup to parts 1&2 on the TouchYerWood kink meme. Jack trains Ianto to be his begging bottom submissive. Post-Cyberwoman.
1st part - First Punishment
2nd part - Second Error
3rd part - Needs

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When they entered the bedroom, Jack hit the light switch to the off position, leaving the bedside lamp the only light in the room. Ianto turned to him, eyes bright, before he moved his hand to the switch and flooded the room with light again.And this is where you sell it. So fucking smart. Because here's Ianto not just buying into the game, but also making it clear he's not relationship ready (and man, he's so not) even after that's what he was wanting when Jack called him out on it at the beginning

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Thank you. Your feedback is just wonderful

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Well, I'm glad you got a journal for this as it makes discussion easier, and I like talking to people about their stuff.

I've only seen a small amount of age-play int he fandom, and I feel like, largely by writers who don't consciously understand what their writing. Seeing some from people who are clear on what they are talking about would be (is this where this is going) a nice change of pace? There are certainly enough elements in Ianto's background that make me believe it as a kink of his, and why it might appeal to Jack goes without saying.

Also, cheers on having a good realistic safeword moment with a compelling aftermath.

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Thanks for that, on the safeword. :)

Regarding ageplay, I'm actually not necessarily planning to go there...I don't know that I could write that convincingly either. I mean that I see it linked to spanking/discipline rather often rather than the characters having a dom and sub dynamic without the Daddy element. They're just two disparate kinks to me.

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*nod*nod*nod*

It's not my kink particualrly, but you're almost handing me a challenge here.

Anyway... I'm really looking forward to the next part of this. From the hints we've seen here I suspect their negotiations of affection are going to be as fucked up as the rest of it.

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I will read your story! I bet it would be awesome.

Thanks also for the lovely rec. You're right...there are repetitive parts. It was done purposely, but I can see how that's not really reader-pleasin'.

Negotiations are to be the next part.

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Woohoo!

(I'm almost always a concrit reviewer, but it means I like you! Eventhough I know it's "not done" but seriously, I check your journal like 3 times a day for more updates... because I want more!)

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Concrit is more than welcomed. It's savored and taken to heart.

Please, please don't hesitate; I'd love this to be a good series.

*Happy!*