+shakes head+ We're utterly cruel to our characters' eyes, and we like maggots too much.
Otherwise, lovely piece. Even if you only wrote it so that you were writing, quite a nice portrait of your little fellow. Can't decide what to think of the girl, but she saves people and hasn't asked for anything back yet, so she gets the benefit of the doubt.
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Otherwise, lovely piece. Even if you only wrote it so that you were writing, quite a nice portrait of your little fellow. Can't decide what to think of the girl, but she saves people and hasn't asked for anything back yet, so she gets the benefit of the doubt.
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It gets interesting. :-)
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