Thor, Loki, AU, Non-Con, Angst, No pairings, Possible torture and Character's death
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December 3 2012, 00:30:15 UTC
Thor is a policeman. Together with his colleagues he does anything he can to find a serial killer who's been kidnapping, raping, torturing and slowly killing teenage boys around 16-18. There are a lot of victims already, but they still can't find the sadistic murderer.
One of Thor's colleagues suggests using a bait to lure the criminal into a trap and capture him. Someone says that Thor's younger brother looks a lot like the sadist's type: lean, fragile-looking body, dark hair, pale skin, etc. So they suggest using Loki as a bait. Thor is absolutely furious and refuses to make Loki a part of it. He's very protective and really cares for his little brother's safety. Cares too much to allow anything like that.
But there are new victims, new dead, mutilated bodies of young boys. People are horrified, mothers are scared for their sons, media goes crazy, but the investigation seems to not move the police any closer to the murderer at all. Thor's colleagues swear that Loki won't be hurt, because everything will be under their control and Thor himself will be there to make sure of it, taking part in the operation. Eventually Thor agrees though he's absolutely not happy about the idea.
He talks to Loki about it and Loki agrees to be a bait.
They think everything is under control, but it's not. Somehow Loki gets kidnapped during the operation and the kidnapper leaves no trails to follow him.
Thor is appalled and devastated. He knows that Loki doesn't have much time. He starts his own investigation and... there's something that makes him start suspecting one of his colleagues, the one who probably initially suggested Loki as a bait.
Good or bad ending, any is fine. But I'm crazy about angst and hurt/comfort.
Re: Thor, Loki, AU, Non-Con, Angst, No pairings, Possible torture and Character's deathhowbrittleDecember 28 2012, 20:00:33 UTC
Ever since I read the prompt I've been wanting to fill this! I hope I won't disappoint. Just bear in mind that updates will probably come pretty slowly and this will end up being long.
Second fill: Something wicked 1a/? (TW for Rape, Torture and Murder)grimmie_meFebruary 12 2013, 12:22:48 UTC
Uhm, hi all! I hope I'm not stepping on any toes with starting this second fill before howbrittle has gotten the chance to post her/his story, but the plotbunnies bit hard and were quite persistant. I'll post further chapters as comments to this one so that I don't disturb the rest of the thread. Hope you all enjoy!
Title: Something wicked 1/? Warnings: Rape, murder and torture Disclaimer: I do not own any recognisable characters, they're all copywrited by Marvel.
“Listen up, people!” Captain Fury yelled into the chaos that was his police department. “We’ve got another one.”
Nobody needed to ask what he was talking about. It was the ninth victim in a row and by now they knew the pattern by heart: their serial killer would abduct a male teenager between 16 and 18 with a pale complexion and black hair, rape and torture them for a week and then brutally murder them and leave the body for the homicide department to find.
So far they had been able to keep the case largely out of the media, but it seemed like that would only be a matter of time if the tally kept rising like this. The guy only waited a week before kidnapping a new victim, barely enough time to decide on who he was going to take next and where he would do it. He was one of the most active killers they had ever had in their city.
And despite that, the guy never made a mistake. The crime scenes were devoid of fingerprints, he used a condom while raping those poor kids so that no DNA was left behind, there was no trail of blood, no tiretracks, no nothing. Fury drove them relentlessly, but even he had to admit they had precious few leads to work with.
Officer Thor Odinson looked along with the rest of the present force while their commander showed them the pictures of the last dumped body. The kid could not have been older than 17 and beneath the blood and bruises that were all over his face, you could still see that he had been beautiful. Autopsies had shown that the perp saved their faces for last, just before he killed them. Apparently the bastard liked them to look pretty when he had his fun with them. The child (young adult?) lay with his face to the side and naked where the killer had dumped him on his front in an alley between two warehouses at the docks. There were photo’s from every angle, showing bruises, cuts, burns, ropebites and other injuries that Thor couldn’t place immediately.
Thor felt bile rise in his gut: every time he saw one of those victims, his mind tricked him for just a moment into thinking that it was his own younger brother laying there. Loki was only 16 himself and had the same slender build, pale skin and dark hair. They had lived together ever since their parents had died two years earlier and Thor had gotten custody, being 5 years older and having just entered the policeforce. He thanked the gods every night he came home to find Loki there with dinner or reading or doing schoolwork. His brother was safe for now and Thor had made sure he stayed safe by asking him to not go out alone. Loki had looked at him questioningly, but aquised and said he would walk with Sigyn and Amora who lived in the same apartment block.
“Our victim is 17 year old Mark Rodney. He was nabbed on the way home from school a week ago.” Fury’s voice brought Thor back to the problem at hand. “Forensics is all over that crimescene with a fine comb, gentlemen, we’ll have their preliminary report by this evening. For now, I want all of you to go and question possible eyewitnesses, have a good look around the docks. Hammer, I want you and Rogers to go and speak with the victim’s parents and friends. Anything could prove to be the break we need to finally nail this bastard to the wall. Get to it!”
A chorus of ‘Yes, sir.’ sounded as they gathered their paperwork. Thor’s partner Phil Coulson joined him at his desk, together with Rogers and Hammer. “So, another one.” Justin Hammer said while Thor collected his stuff.
Re: Second fill: Something wicked 1b/? (TW for Rape, Torture and Murder)grimmie_meFebruary 12 2013, 12:24:15 UTC
“The ninth one.” Steve Rogers said, his blue eyes narrowed with anger and his blond hair askew. “I sure wish I could get my hands on the bastard.” Steve was a good cop, one of the best, with a heart of gold and a willingness to help that made working with him a pleasure. Justin was a good talker, which was why he mostly handled the talks with the victim’s parents. He did however have a tendency to blurt out blunt things when among friends and that made him a little less than the perfect partner.
Justin demonstrated this abilty once more when he took up the picture from Thor’s desk of himself and his brother and said casually. “Maybe we should think about using bait to reel him in. Your brother looks like he fits the profile: young, slender, pale and easy on the eyes.”
Thor saw red for a moment and only Phil’s ever calm hand on his arm restrained him from hitting his co-worker. “Out of the question.” he growled, “This is way too dangerous a situation to put a 16 year old in. I like my brother in one piece, Hammer, and you’ll be using him as bait only over my dead body.”
“Relax, man.” Hammer said, giving the picture a last look before replacing it on the desk, “I was just making a suggestion. Some lead will pop up soon and we won’t need to take such drastic measures.”
Thor let his eyes burn holes in the other’s for a while longer before huffing and pulling away from under Phil’s hand, grunting “Let’s go then.”
They were driving to the docks when Phil spoke to him next. Thor was grateful to be partnered with him: he formed a cool counterpoint to the heated outbursts that sometimes came over him. Phil had let him cool down before he spoke now, making it possible for Thor to look at things rationally again. “You know Justin blabs out things without thinking most of the time.”
“It’s my brother he was talking about Phil.” Thor said, taking his eyes of the road for a moment to look over to the passengerseat. “Justin should learn some tact.”
“He should, but he’s not worth you blowing up about. If you had hit him, there would have been a report and consequences.”
“I know, but dammit, Phil, don’t you think I’ve noticed how much Loki looks like this perp’s type? Because I have and it’s made my nights very sleepless these last months. I made Loki promise he wouldn’t go out alone anywhere and I’m constantly worried that he won’t be there when I get home.”
Phil sighed “This mess has got to stop soon. Fury is under a lot of pressure from the top dogs and if the media gets as much as a hint at how widespread these murders are? Things are going to get desperate then for real.”
“I know,” Thor sighed, “which is why I’ve been working such long hours lately. I want this piece of garbage behind bars, Phil. I want my little brother to be able to go out when he wants to without having to have an escort. But until we get a lead, that’s not happening.”
Re: Second fill: Something wicked 1c/? (TW for Rape, Torture and Murder)grimmie_meFebruary 12 2013, 12:25:28 UTC
“We’ll find something.” Phil said, “Sooner or later he has to slip up.”
Whatever they had been hoping to find though, they didn’t find it at the docks. There were no security camera’s to get images from, no guard that patrolled during the night: The warehouses themselves had been empty for more than a week so no traffic had gone near them until that morning, when a shipment was supposed to be stored there.
“No-one’s seen a thing.” Clint said when he and his partner Natasha Romanov came to see if they had had more luck at their end of their search.
“Same here,” Phil reported. “Whoever he is, he sure knows what he’s doing.”
“Maybe the lab turned something up.” Natasha said, but the way her mouth pulled to the side showed she didn’t really believe that.
They drove back to the station and filed their reports. Steve stopped by at their desk, saying that Mark’s parents and friends hadn’t been any help either. No-one had seen or noticed anything unusual, neither about Mark’s behaviour or in what he said. He had just walked home from a meeting at school after dark one day and disappeared somewhere between the schoolbuilding and his house.
By the time Thor got home it was 7 pm and Loki was sitting in front of the television doing his homework.
“Hey!” the dark-haired youth said, smiling at his older brother. “I made pasta, it’s in a bowl in the fridge.”
“Thanks.” Thor said, going over and hugging him, trying hard not to show how relieved he was that his brother was safe at home. “How was today?” he asked, moving to the kitchen to heat up his supper.
“Okay, I guess.” Loki said, “I stayed a little later because Sigyn and Amora had classes later than I did.”
“I’m sorry, Loki.” Thor said, watching his plate spin in the microwave. “You just can’t walk over the streets alone right now.”
“It’s something to do with a case, isn’t it?” Loki said, letting out a long-suffering sigh. He knew Thor couldn’t tell him anything about it, but he had always been curious by nature.
“Yes,” his older brother said. “I can’t tell you any more and I know it’s a drag to have to wait almost every day, but please make sure you don’t walk home alone?”
Loki nodded immediately: he knew that when Thor asked something like that it was for his own good even if he didn’t like it. The blonde collected his food from the microwave, picked up a fork and joined his brother on the couch. There was some talkshow going on and they both used it as background noise. Loki was working on something that looked like a mathproblem and Thor was going over the preliminary report from the new crimescene.
They both worked in silence until a flash on the screen and the announcement of breaking news pulled their attention to the television. Thor breath lodged in his throat as he saw his own crimescene smeared out over the screen. The body had luckily been removed already, but there was still blood where it had been. Loki took the remote and increased the volume.
“Police found the dead body of a teenager this morning, lying between these two warehouses. The victim seems to have been a 17 year old boy that had been missing for a week. Police-chief Nicolas Fury was not available for comment, but inside sources say this is not the first victim to have been found this way and there could be a serial killer preying on the community. We’ll have more for you in the late night news broadcast.”
The talkshow resumed, but neither Thor nor Loki payed any attention to it. Finally Loki found his voice and asked “Is this why you don’t want me out alone?”
Thor looked at his little brother and nodded. “Yeah. They’re right, this kid is not the first and we’ve found nothing yet. Please, Loki, please be careful.”
The youngster bit his lip and nodded. “I promise, and I won’t say anything to anyone else either. I know you’re not supposed to talk about ongoing cases.” Thor ruffled his hair in gratitude and went back to his report, knowing the stakes has just gone up.
One of Thor's colleagues suggests using a bait to lure the criminal into a trap and capture him. Someone says that Thor's younger brother looks a lot like the sadist's type: lean, fragile-looking body, dark hair, pale skin, etc. So they suggest using Loki as a bait. Thor is absolutely furious and refuses to make Loki a part of it. He's very protective and really cares for his little brother's safety. Cares too much to allow anything like that.
But there are new victims, new dead, mutilated bodies of young boys. People are horrified, mothers are scared for their sons, media goes crazy, but the investigation seems to not move the police any closer to the murderer at all. Thor's colleagues swear that Loki won't be hurt, because everything will be under their control and Thor himself will be there to make sure of it, taking part in the operation. Eventually Thor agrees though he's absolutely not happy about the idea.
He talks to Loki about it and Loki agrees to be a bait.
They think everything is under control, but it's not. Somehow Loki gets kidnapped during the operation and the kidnapper leaves no trails to follow him.
Thor is appalled and devastated. He knows that Loki doesn't have much time. He starts his own investigation and... there's something that makes him start suspecting one of his colleagues, the one who probably initially suggested Loki as a bait.
Good or bad ending, any is fine. But I'm crazy about angst and hurt/comfort.
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I like it!
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this fandom srsly needs more scary things
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Title: Something wicked 1/?
Warnings: Rape, murder and torture
Disclaimer: I do not own any recognisable characters, they're all copywrited by Marvel.
“Listen up, people!” Captain Fury yelled into the chaos that was his police department. “We’ve got another one.”
Nobody needed to ask what he was talking about. It was the ninth victim in a row and by now they knew the pattern by heart: their serial killer would abduct a male teenager between 16 and 18 with a pale complexion and black hair, rape and torture them for a week and then brutally murder them and leave the body for the homicide department to find.
So far they had been able to keep the case largely out of the media, but it seemed like that would only be a matter of time if the tally kept rising like this. The guy only waited a week before kidnapping a new victim, barely enough time to decide on who he was going to take next and where he would do it. He was one of the most active killers they had ever had in their city.
And despite that, the guy never made a mistake. The crime scenes were devoid of fingerprints, he used a condom while raping those poor kids so that no DNA was left behind, there was no trail of blood, no tiretracks, no nothing. Fury drove them relentlessly, but even he had to admit they had precious few leads to work with.
Officer Thor Odinson looked along with the rest of the present force while their commander showed them the pictures of the last dumped body. The kid could not have been older than 17 and beneath the blood and bruises that were all over his face, you could still see that he had been beautiful. Autopsies had shown that the perp saved their faces for last, just before he killed them. Apparently the bastard liked them to look pretty when he had his fun with them. The child (young adult?) lay with his face to the side and naked where the killer had dumped him on his front in an alley between two warehouses at the docks. There were photo’s from every angle, showing bruises, cuts, burns, ropebites and other injuries that Thor couldn’t place immediately.
Thor felt bile rise in his gut: every time he saw one of those victims, his mind tricked him for just a moment into thinking that it was his own younger brother laying there. Loki was only 16 himself and had the same slender build, pale skin and dark hair. They had lived together ever since their parents had died two years earlier and Thor had gotten custody, being 5 years older and having just entered the policeforce. He thanked the gods every night he came home to find Loki there with dinner or reading or doing schoolwork. His brother was safe for now and Thor had made sure he stayed safe by asking him to not go out alone. Loki had looked at him questioningly, but aquised and said he would walk with Sigyn and Amora who lived in the same apartment block.
“Our victim is 17 year old Mark Rodney. He was nabbed on the way home from school a week ago.” Fury’s voice brought Thor back to the problem at hand. “Forensics is all over that crimescene with a fine comb, gentlemen, we’ll have their preliminary report by this evening. For now, I want all of you to go and question possible eyewitnesses, have a good look around the docks. Hammer, I want you and Rogers to go and speak with the victim’s parents and friends. Anything could prove to be the break we need to finally nail this bastard to the wall. Get to it!”
A chorus of ‘Yes, sir.’ sounded as they gathered their paperwork. Thor’s partner Phil Coulson joined him at his desk, together with Rogers and Hammer. “So, another one.” Justin Hammer said while Thor collected his stuff.
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Justin demonstrated this abilty once more when he took up the picture from Thor’s desk of himself and his brother and said casually. “Maybe we should think about using bait to reel him in. Your brother looks like he fits the profile: young, slender, pale and easy on the eyes.”
Thor saw red for a moment and only Phil’s ever calm hand on his arm restrained him from hitting his co-worker. “Out of the question.” he growled, “This is way too dangerous a situation to put a 16 year old in. I like my brother in one piece, Hammer, and you’ll be using him as bait only over my dead body.”
“Relax, man.” Hammer said, giving the picture a last look before replacing it on the desk, “I was just making a suggestion. Some lead will pop up soon and we won’t need to take such drastic measures.”
Thor let his eyes burn holes in the other’s for a while longer before huffing and pulling away from under Phil’s hand, grunting “Let’s go then.”
They were driving to the docks when Phil spoke to him next. Thor was grateful to be partnered with him: he formed a cool counterpoint to the heated outbursts that sometimes came over him. Phil had let him cool down before he spoke now, making it possible for Thor to look at things rationally again. “You know Justin blabs out things without thinking most of the time.”
“It’s my brother he was talking about Phil.” Thor said, taking his eyes of the road for a moment to look over to the passengerseat. “Justin should learn some tact.”
“He should, but he’s not worth you blowing up about. If you had hit him, there would have been a report and consequences.”
“I know, but dammit, Phil, don’t you think I’ve noticed how much Loki looks like this perp’s type? Because I have and it’s made my nights very sleepless these last months. I made Loki promise he wouldn’t go out alone anywhere and I’m constantly worried that he won’t be there when I get home.”
Phil sighed “This mess has got to stop soon. Fury is under a lot of pressure from the top dogs and if the media gets as much as a hint at how widespread these murders are? Things are going to get desperate then for real.”
“I know,” Thor sighed, “which is why I’ve been working such long hours lately. I want this piece of garbage behind bars, Phil. I want my little brother to be able to go out when he wants to without having to have an escort. But until we get a lead, that’s not happening.”
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Whatever they had been hoping to find though, they didn’t find it at the docks. There were no security camera’s to get images from, no guard that patrolled during the night: The warehouses themselves had been empty for more than a week so no traffic had gone near them until that morning, when a shipment was supposed to be stored there.
“No-one’s seen a thing.” Clint said when he and his partner Natasha Romanov came to see if they had had more luck at their end of their search.
“Same here,” Phil reported. “Whoever he is, he sure knows what he’s doing.”
“Maybe the lab turned something up.” Natasha said, but the way her mouth pulled to the side showed she didn’t really believe that.
They drove back to the station and filed their reports. Steve stopped by at their desk, saying that Mark’s parents and friends hadn’t been any help either. No-one had seen or noticed anything unusual, neither about Mark’s behaviour or in what he said. He had just walked home from a meeting at school after dark one day and disappeared somewhere between the schoolbuilding and his house.
By the time Thor got home it was 7 pm and Loki was sitting in front of the television doing his homework.
“Hey!” the dark-haired youth said, smiling at his older brother. “I made pasta, it’s in a bowl in the fridge.”
“Thanks.” Thor said, going over and hugging him, trying hard not to show how relieved he was that his brother was safe at home. “How was today?” he asked, moving to the kitchen to heat up his supper.
“Okay, I guess.” Loki said, “I stayed a little later because Sigyn and Amora had classes later than I did.”
“I’m sorry, Loki.” Thor said, watching his plate spin in the microwave. “You just can’t walk over the streets alone right now.”
“It’s something to do with a case, isn’t it?” Loki said, letting out a long-suffering sigh. He knew Thor couldn’t tell him anything about it, but he had always been curious by nature.
“Yes,” his older brother said. “I can’t tell you any more and I know it’s a drag to have to wait almost every day, but please make sure you don’t walk home alone?”
Loki nodded immediately: he knew that when Thor asked something like that it was for his own good even if he didn’t like it. The blonde collected his food from the microwave, picked up a fork and joined his brother on the couch. There was some talkshow going on and they both used it as background noise. Loki was working on something that looked like a mathproblem and Thor was going over the preliminary report from the new crimescene.
They both worked in silence until a flash on the screen and the announcement of breaking news pulled their attention to the television. Thor breath lodged in his throat as he saw his own crimescene smeared out over the screen. The body had luckily been removed already, but there was still blood where it had been. Loki took the remote and increased the volume.
“Police found the dead body of a teenager this morning, lying between these two warehouses. The victim seems to have been a 17 year old boy that had been missing for a week. Police-chief Nicolas Fury was not available for comment, but inside sources say this is not the first victim to have been found this way and there could be a serial killer preying on the community. We’ll have more for you in the late night news broadcast.”
The talkshow resumed, but neither Thor nor Loki payed any attention to it. Finally Loki found his voice and asked “Is this why you don’t want me out alone?”
Thor looked at his little brother and nodded. “Yeah. They’re right, this kid is not the first and we’ve found nothing yet. Please, Loki, please be careful.”
The youngster bit his lip and nodded. “I promise, and I won’t say anything to anyone else either. I know you’re not supposed to talk about ongoing cases.” Thor ruffled his hair in gratitude and went back to his report, knowing the stakes has just gone up.
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Hope the rest will come across as good as the first bit did!
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Please more soon!
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