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Prompt Post No. 1

May 04, 2011 02:47

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Re: Fill: How to use yourself [2/3] anonymous May 23 2011, 13:30:57 UTC

But everything was okay. Loki still had himself.

.

No changes to the inhabitants of Asgard in many days.

Loki sat under a statue, on a balcony far far away from the feasting hall, hidden in a secret corner of the palace. His head bent forward as he read from the book in his lap, engrossed by a display of mysteries and paradoxes which claimed to be unsolvable.

He knew precisely who it was, and similarly Loki had no need to conceal anything from himself.

This time, Loki relaxed as a pair of arms had wrapped itself around his frame. A warm body was pressing to his back, and a head rested on his shoulder. Loki sat still for a quiet moment, before he leaned back in the other person’s arms, resting his head in the crook of his neck.

This person would never move away from Loki. As the trickster turned his head he saw a pair of bright green eyes and then a young man man with black hair and a crooked grin. The man stared at him with warm and gentle eyes, his expression soft and inviting.

Loki let himself melt completely into the man's arms.

"Why do I keep doing this?" he asked, mildly curious.

The man shrugged simply as he nuzzled Loki's neck. "You felt like you needed it."

Loki stared silently up at the starlit sky, and when the stars were gone he turned his attention back to the book. Yet he couldn't focus, his eyes were stinging, and his body trembled for reasons he really didn't want to consider.

He turned his head, and placed a soft kiss on the cheek of his other self.

There were voices coming from far away, but he didn't want to leave.

Loki let him wrap his own arms around himself, and read on.

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He would be the only one to catch himself, should he ever fall.

Re: Fill: How to use yourself [complete] anonymous May 23 2011, 13:34:14 UTC

Oops, should have been 3/3 up there.

Anon apologises for any mistakes, this was written in one go because the prompt reminded me of a personal experience and wouldn't let go. Another apology to the OP because I have a feeling this was not what you wanted, however I hope so much angst is a goodt thing?! Please enjoy. :)

-awkward deanon-ing- ingu May 26 2011, 06:45:33 UTC

Man I wasn't going to do this... but if anyone's interested in an updated (and hopefully improved) version of this fic you can find it here. = =; This version has so many mistakes.

Re: -awkward deanon-ing- ingu May 26 2011, 08:11:23 UTC

...and a massive thank you to everyone who commented. I wasn't even sure if it worked and it was such a rough un-edited first draft thing so I'm incredibly glad that you guys enjoyed it.

I'm terribly sorry for the broken sentences and poor grammar, and apologies to the anon also since I took your prompt somewhere entirely different.

Once again, thanks so much for the comments! It means a lot. =D

Re: Fill: How to use yourself [2/3] ginger_maya May 23 2011, 13:43:28 UTC

LOKI, SWEETHEART, I WILL GIVE YOU ALL THE HUGGLES IN THE NINE WORLDS IF I COULD. AND THEN I'D REPEAT.

Anon, this broke my little fangirl heart. Poor, poor, lonely Loki.

Captcha: edishied prejudice

EVEN CAPTCHA AGREES!

Re: Fill: How to use yourself [2/3] korilian May 23 2011, 16:08:53 UTC

*Sends a thousand virtual hugs Loki's way* (And some to the author).

Re: Fill: How to use yourself [2/3] finchyy May 23 2011, 16:17:06 UTC

I am in pain, writer,
the loneliness is felt

Re: Fill: How to use yourself [2/3] math_camel May 23 2011, 19:09:27 UTC

Holy Moly. That was fantastic and sad and I love it! Also, I'm totally going to pretend that girl is Sigyn because it works perfectly in my head.

Re: Fill: How to use yourself [2/3] aaido May 23 2011, 20:59:14 UTC

That was so sad. Poor Loki. He's so lonely =(

I would give you a hug if I could, Loki!

Re: Fill: How to use yourself [2/3] nuiigurumii May 24 2011, 00:22:49 UTC

So sad, poor Loki. :'(

Re: Fill: How to use yourself [2/3] essencerare May 24 2011, 12:32:06 UTC

Oh, oh god, I'm actually on the verge of tears right now. It's that quiet, understated pain from all the loneliness that does me in. Thank you for this, anon.

Re: Fill: How to use yourself [2/3] japanesenut May 24 2011, 15:37:29 UTC

I honestly felt lonely! wow Anon, this was beautiful angsty genious! I felt like materialising Loki right next to me and hug him to death. Well written!

Re: Fill: How to use yourself [2/3] wolfielove May 24 2011, 16:23:51 UTC

FWGEYSG!!!!! I NEED A HUG RIGHT NOW!!!!!!1!

seriously, this fill made my eyes tear up. seriously amazing conveyance of emotion!

Re: Fill: How to use yourself [2/3] poemwithnorhyme May 25 2011, 01:02:03 UTC

This is written so well! And how sad it is :( Beautiful job!

Re: Fill: How to use yourself [2/3] garamsythe May 25 2011, 02:34:05 UTC

This made me wibble. ;~;

Nicely done~

Re: Fill: How to use yourself [2/3] asgardianthor May 25 2011, 09:36:05 UTC

OMG. HEARTMELT. Love the repetition (in Part 1 and Part 3). LIKE WOW, this is too sad :((

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