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Re: Loki/Sif, Solution (Part III)
anonymous
May 22 2011, 03:41:18 UTC
“It…was still fun,” Loki says, cautiously.
“Well, yes,” Sif says, rolling her eyes. “That is why I want to do it again.”
“With me. Ow! What was that for?”
She glares at him, finger still poised to jab. “Of course with you, idiot. Who else?”
“I…I don’t…”
“…unless you don’t want to,” she says, slowly, sitting up and crossing her arms over her chest.
“No, don’t-” He’s also sitting up now, hand outstretched before he snatches it back. “I want to,” he says, wondering why exactly he’s getting so tongue-tied. Then he remembers just how it felt, with her on him, pressing herself against him, pressing herself around him once she’d managed to slide him in without wincing. And he’d never, he’d never- well, he’d just been kissed before, nothing else.
Maybe with practice he wouldn’t feel so unable to utter an intelligent sentence.
“I want,” he says, and stops. “I want you. Again.” Always.
(but it’s more than just her, it’s a question of, a question of…It’s because she’s seen him come utterly undone, open and vulnerable, and he needs to see her let go like that, too, just to make everything even again)
Sif smiles at him, slowly and shyly and brilliantly. “Good,” she says, and leans closer to kiss him.
--
Later, she gets him to cut her hair with his dagger. When it grows back, it’s dark as night and - he thinks - suits her far better than her golden locks.
Later, she’ll approach him again, somewhere quiet, and kiss him again, and this time they’ll end up in his room, with an actual bed, and that is when he decides that he can’t ever imagine opening himself up like this to anyone but Sif.
Fin.
Hopefully close enough to the prompt you to like! :) And sorry about the lack of actual smut, the muses weren't really co-operating.
Re: Loki/Sif, Solution (Part III)
anonymous
May 23 2011, 05:04:33 UTC
this is fantastic! Sif and Loki are lovely, and vulnerable Loki's thoughts were so perfect. Anon, I would read the crap outta anything else you feel inspired to write in this vein!
Re: Loki/Sif, Solution (Part III)
anonymous
May 23 2011, 06:44:04 UTC
Eee, thank you! And I'm really, really glad that vulnerable!Loki's thoughts worked - they were a major part of why I did it from his POV, and it was a fun little character!exercise. :D Glad it worked!
Re: Loki/Sif, Solution (Part III)athames_kissJune 10 2011, 17:33:32 UTC
This was very sweet and beautiful. I loved that for once Loki was taken by surprise (even though it should have been obvious where that conversation was headed :)).
Re: Loki/Sif, Solution (Part III)lokifanJuly 30 2011, 03:57:48 UTC
OMG, I loved it. The start, the explanation for her dark hair - and I really love reading about teenagers (whether having sexytimes or not). Trying so hard and so charming and in Loki's case, not very good at things but willing to learn ♥
“Well, yes,” Sif says, rolling her eyes. “That is why I want to do it again.”
“With me. Ow! What was that for?”
She glares at him, finger still poised to jab. “Of course with you, idiot. Who else?”
“I…I don’t…”
“…unless you don’t want to,” she says, slowly, sitting up and crossing her arms over her chest.
“No, don’t-” He’s also sitting up now, hand outstretched before he snatches it back. “I want to,” he says, wondering why exactly he’s getting so tongue-tied. Then he remembers just how it felt, with her on him, pressing herself against him, pressing herself around him once she’d managed to slide him in without wincing. And he’d never, he’d never- well, he’d just been kissed before, nothing else.
Maybe with practice he wouldn’t feel so unable to utter an intelligent sentence.
“I want,” he says, and stops. “I want you. Again.” Always.
(but it’s more than just her, it’s a question of, a question of…It’s because she’s seen him come utterly undone, open and vulnerable, and he needs to see her let go like that, too, just to make everything even again)
Sif smiles at him, slowly and shyly and brilliantly. “Good,” she says, and leans closer to kiss him.
--
Later, she gets him to cut her hair with his dagger. When it grows back, it’s dark as night and - he thinks - suits her far better than her golden locks.
Later, she’ll approach him again, somewhere quiet, and kiss him again, and this time they’ll end up in his room, with an actual bed, and that is when he decides that he can’t ever imagine opening himself up like this to anyone but Sif.
Fin.
Hopefully close enough to the prompt you to like! :) And sorry about the lack of actual smut, the muses weren't really co-operating.
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Love it, love you, want to have my way with you in a forest glen ;)
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and :D!
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what, you mean it ISN'T? ;)
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