Three Ways (aka my first Norribeth fic!)

Jun 15, 2007 21:48

Title: Three Ways Elizabeth Swann Could Have Been Happy, and One Way She Is Not
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Reference to events of AWE
Disclaimer: I'm too poor to own anything related to Disney.  I don't even have the plastic ears.
Summary: AU imaginings of Elizabeth's life

Title: Three Ways Elizabeth Swann Could Have Been Happy, and One Way She Is Not
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tisthebeads June 16 2007, 05:01:53 UTC
This is absolutely lovely. I like the second one especially. :)

Please keep writing, you're quite good. :D

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madamtorsion June 16 2007, 06:01:36 UTC
This is exactly what I needed. I went to see AWE again this evening and I'll tell you what, it doesn't feel any better watching that scene a second time round.

Oh, if only the first had come to pass. I'd have seen that movie. ;)

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nautilusl2 June 16 2007, 07:07:57 UTC
Ah man I love these - even the last one. I was just thinking "thats what you get Mrs. Turner... thats what you get..grrr" because she freakin deserves it. Bah. man I hate her. I'm so sorry ( ... )

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artic_fox June 16 2007, 08:26:27 UTC
This is your first Norribeth fic? It is just wonderful! I love how you have structured it in four parts, and the alternatives that Elizabeth could have had. The first two are my favourites (for obvious reasons), but it is all written beautifully. I hope you plan to write more in this fandom!

*adds this to the norribeth fic archive*

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commodore_lydia June 16 2007, 14:10:14 UTC
Wow - if this is your first Norribeth fic, this is a wonderful start!

I love how you contrast three ways the three movies could have gone differently with the way the movie did. (And I giggled when Elizabeth thinks marrying Beckett would have been better!)

“Think you can find room on your ship for a deceitful, traitorous drunkard?” He asks, his smirk reappearing now and the pang in her heart reminds her how much she has missed him.

“No.” She answer, smiling at his momentary confusion, “But I’ll gladly keep you, you wonderful, loyal, brave, courageous-”

I LOVE that part. Excellent job!

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