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Oct 02, 2007 21:27

James was caught between being the man he was and being the man he wanted to be. The man he was would hunt down those pirates and not rest until every single one had been sent to his maker. The man he was would exact retribution fitting the crime when it came to Mr. Turner, who had lied. The lie had nearly been fatal for Elizabeth since he had ( Read more... )

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ophelivia October 3 2007, 20:56:15 UTC

Ah SexuallyFrustrated!James my favorite. You have them both characterized perfectly

june7rose October 4 2007, 00:48:42 UTC

Thanks, he's about to snap in every way. I can't wait to see what happens next when he gets squeezed even harder. Poor James. :)

commodore_lydia October 4 2007, 03:37:13 UTC

Repressed1James is so much fun ... Poor man's really in over his head! Always so close to loosing it! And, I admit, I giggled at, Well that had done it, no water required. Leave it to reminder of reality to put him off.

Fabulous chapter - looking forward to your next installment!

june7rose October 4 2007, 04:17:30 UTC

I love that dichotomy about him and often play it up -- competent and even merciless in battle, and all blubbering shaky legs when it comes to matters of the heart. But I always felt that he was so repressed because he was scared of rejection, but if he finally got Elizabeth to the altar and in his bed, he'd become a different man.

faibefe October 4 2007, 04:14:01 UTC

EEE! Am thrilled, LOVE the turn the story took, I was so scared! Muchos thanks for the fabulous update and update again SOON!

june7rose October 4 2007, 05:01:59 UTC

Thanks, James isn't out of the woods yet though. There will be a few more obstacles!

snowbryneich October 13 2007, 17:45:24 UTC

There is so much I love about this point, I love her sneaking up to cuddle him, and how it affects him. How it has to be her decision about Will but that he hates the thought of him touching her. And Elizabeth all willing and he has to be the one with some control. Of course as always and he has to phrase it properly "You will wear white on your wedding day." (Anacronistic but still lovely and well it's not like POTC cares about historical accuracy) and she just giggles! And then mentions Will like a splash of cold water. And the men being amused with him, poor James, he has her but she never makes his life easy.