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[june7rose]

Three Years Later

James could barely believe the amount of paperwork sitting in front of him.  The Dauntless had taken a pirate ship, not a small country, but if they had wrested Martinique from the French, it could not have been more complicated.  He had to write reports to superior officers about how they happened upon the ship, how the

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[lizzie_lefev]

AH! SCORE!! Finally, I was getting worried a little bit, but of course...it's Norribeth, what was I thinking? YAY! I can't wait until the next chapter.

[june7rose]

Thanks. I had to give him some love, I'm always compelled to give him a happy ending.

[artic_fox]

Brava brava! Is this the final part? I loved the first section with the picnic - so beautifully described. Well done!

[june7rose]

Thanks. I would love to keep going, but I'm going to start being very busy, so I don't know when I'll get around to it. Of course I love writing this stuff, so I'll probably get around to it. ;)

[flyingpigs_live]

Ooh, drama, but LOL at the picnic!

And I love that last line about the Pearl. :)

[june7rose]

Thanks, I left it open to keep going. It would interesting to see what would happen if Elizabeth was still kidnapped, and Will also went after her. Hmmm...

[commodore_lydia]

Hah! I love your OC's! The picnic incident was lovely - the scenery beautifully described, the events amusing and enlightening, and the fact that James makes better progress with Elizabeth in that one afternoon than three years - very fitting.

James could not quite believe it. He met her eyes and they shared a smile that made his heart want to burst. He wanted to drag her against him and kiss her so hard she’d never think of another man again. But duty, always duty.

“I will see you soon, Elizabeth”, he said and turned his attention back to Jack. Tonight he intended to truly kiss her.

Three cheers for James!

This was absolutely lovely - by all means, continue!

[june7rose]

Thanks!!

[ophelivia]

Yay! Just the way it should have been!