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[snowbryneich]

Pairing: Norribeth, with hints of background Will/Elizabeth
Genre(s): Drama/Romance/Hurt!Comfort
Warning: Utterly AU, marriage fic, mentions of sexual assault, Elizabeth is underage by modern law. Mentions of non-con, sexual assault.
Spoilers: CotBP only
Summary: James is further baffled by his wife, and the governor comes to call.
Rating: PG-13 at

Comments

[ericadawn16]

It was wonderful especially the drinking problem.

[snowbryneich]

Thanks very much,

[clanne]

Love love love love. You have happily distracted me from my studies. Bless you.

As always, looking forward to the next part.

[snowbryneich]

Thanks very much, glad to be a distraction.

It's coming along

[june7rose]

Excellent, very human versions of both of them.

[snowbryneich]

Thanks very much,

[commodore_lydia]

This continues to be AMAZING, in many, many ways. Let's see:

James - he's doing the best he can, however he can, but he's definitely out of his depth with Elizabeth, the pregnancy, and the entire situation in general. Poor man, to have to play father to one's wife (especially when he'd much rather be husband and closer to friends and equals).

Elizabeth - she's still largely a teenage girl, and it shows. She's weak, but manipulative and shows that sneaky streak, that rather Machievellian tendency to disregard means in proportion to the end. The drinking problem was a real shock, but an apt one that fits the situation.

Please, write more soon!

[snowbryneich]

Thank you so much for the detailed feedback.

I write very non linearly but there should be another part soon.

[june7rose]

Are we going to see a part 4 soon? This is really original and I'm looking forward to it. No pressure. ;)

[snowbryneich]

I hope to have it sent to beta by the end of today! It's been slow this one I had a bit of a block. I'm glad I haven't lost interest with my slowness! :)