for the Mistaken Identity Challenge

[artemismuse]

“Elizabeth, darling, light of my life-” She rolls her eyes at his choice of endearments. “There’s someone here I think you’ll be very pleased to see!” My God, she thinks, could he trill his words any more obviously? This potential suitor must be hideous indeed, for Daddy to talk him up so. Her temper flares.

“Daddy, we’ve already been here for

Comments

[lizzie_sparrow]

Aw, that was so sad... =[

Great job though!

[artic_fox]

Wow, you are so wonderful, and you wrote that so quickly! I just love the idea of them "not seeing" each other, which is definetly a great take on the 'mistaken identity' prompt. I especially love her 'battle cry', and James seems so very natural and kind in the first part - more open, and less restrained which is a particular favourite of mine.

Gorgeous job as usual, and I look forward to the other parts :D

[underworldvixen]

Aww, so sad! I can't wait for more! Poor James :(

[commodore_lydia]

You rock. Seriously. ;)

I can't say what I like better, Elizabeth's assessment of her suitors, dear ol' Weatherby being a pushy mama, or "It's either that or indigestion." The battle-cry was inspired.

The second part was lovely - angsty but lovely. You shift tone so well!