Wooo~! 1st Fanfic

Mar 18, 2010 21:46


THANK YOU~! to the two of you who read my previous entry~
i love to know that people actually read what i write ^-^ (makes me all giddy inside :D)

anyways... here is the fanfic i promised... i think it's gonna be a series... but i dunno the length.
also since i can kinda get very swamped in work and exams... i might not be able to update regularly. (sorry)

it's title is: Totally Captivated
rating: pg??? (will get higher eventually)

now... the title may seem familiar to some... cos it's the title of my fav BL manhwa. the plot is also gonna be quite similar and i just think that the characters match so well with members of SJ.

i won't spoil too much about the characters and what might happen but it's defo HAEHYUK! (by bias ^-^)

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Chapter 1
Hyukjae was a university student. He was a tender age of 23. He lived alone in Seoul. He never knew his dad, and his mum had abandoned him when he was young. So he basically thought of himself as an orphan, all alone in the world. This meant that he was quite affectionate but never really allowed anyone to get too close to his heart. Hyukjae was always a good boy, well behaved and friendly.

So what was he doing mopping the floors of the office of a “loan shark”? Well, he claims that he is a legitimate business man, but Hyukjae thinks otherwise. And you might be wondering how he got himself working for some loan sharks in the first place... well let's go back a few weeks.

Hyukjae and Sungmin had been going out for a good couple of months. They were good together, but Hyukjae was always a curious one (too curious for his own good). He always wondered if one could have amazing sex with someone you didn't love. So when the opportunity arose, he took it. After the said deed, he concluded that - yes it was possible. Unfortunately for him, Sungmin had to walk in at that precise moment. Sungmin being the cute little innocent bunny he was, was obviously not too pleased at the sight. He left in an angry hissy fit with tears brimming his eyes.

Now, Sungmin and Hyukjae always did have fights before, but this was on another level. Hyukjae continuously called Sungmin to apologise and begged for forgiveness. However, Sungmin never returned any of his messages. He also somehow managed to avoid Hyukjae at school as well.
It was a few weeks after the incident when Hyukjae saw Sungmin again. He was leaving university when a very smart BMW pulled up in front of him. At first he saw Sungmin come out. He was so relieved and happy to see him that he immediately moved to go talk to him. However, a strong arm blocked his way, and Hyukjae turned to see who it was. There standing before him, in a “what the hell do you think you're doing?”, hot, bad-ass pose, was the second most handsome guy Hyukjae had ever seen in his life. He had on, chic and smart-casual attire, which was well made and perfectly fitted his muscular body. His hair was a light hazel brown and cut to a mid-length. He had amazing facial features and eyes that you could just lose yourself in. But before he could stare any more, the said guy spoke in a mocking tone.

"So is this the loser who has been stalking you, Sungmin?”

Hyukjae was surprised by what the guy said. He turned to Sungmin, awaiting his response. Sungmin simply stared back and answered.

“Yeah.”

Then the guy shoved Hyukjae to the ground.

“Just leave Sungmin alone. He's not interested in you any more. He's with me now.”

Hyukjae was hurt at that statement. It was true that he no longer loved Sungmin any more, but the fact that Sungmin had moved on and his now boyfriend was abusing him. Hyukjae was a bit upset.

The guy turned to leave and motioned for Sungmin to get in the car as well, but Sungmin paused and looked at Hyukjae on the floor with a hurt expression on his face.

“Wait Donghae. Why don't you employ him in your office. You always complain that you need someone to look after the office and that woman aren't very good employees. Plus, it's the least he can do for his ex-lover... right Hyukkie?”

Sungmin turned from looking at Donghae to stare at Hyukjae, with a very devious smirk on his face. Hyukjae was still on the ground looking up in disbelief at what Sungmin had just suggested. Panicking in his brain at what Sungmin might be planning for his revenge. Donghae thought for a few moments, then agreed.

So here he was. In Donghae's office. Cleaning the floor.

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Sorry it's a bit short.
Please me kind to me... it's my first fanfic. BUT i do want comments <3

fanfic, totally captivated, haehyuk

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