Everybody reply to this i want to know what you think...good or bad

[nopointinwar]

since some people wanted to read it, this is my latest song. i wrote it in a little different way than i usually would. the music is great and the melody that i sing in is even better, if you would like me to sing it, it'll cost five dollars at the door. like i said it's written in a different style than i normally write in so thats why it may seem a little...veird. there is more to it, but i'm going to change it. please please tell me what you think. thank you.

She's like a girl you read about in a magazine everyday
she's got the looks, the brains, the heart, the shape in almost every way
but with her you take a look and you start to see something new
the new thing that you notice is that she might like you

so now you like this girl and shes on ya
and you act like it's a problem
so you decide to stop and take things easy
boy i wish that hadda' been me
and since we find her so appealing
i would've watched out for her feelings
and i would've kept her to me close
and i would've never let her go

but now you her go, no
she was better than we know
you don't know what you had
now you'll never get her back

(chorus)
because you cried for her and she creid for you
and she misses you and you miss her too
you so easily threw away the love
that you had with her you know