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ashedrake September 6 2009, 20:07:40 UTC
Sylar picks the ornament up, holds it up to the light. It's plastic, an almost filled bubble. When he shakes it, glitter snow tumbles across a rainbow-ringed map of Oregon.

Virginia claps and laughs. The laptop bleeps a hit.

That was absolutely beautiful! The small glimpses of insanity makes Sylar him so much more realistic in this whole endeavour.

And, god, I loved the scene with White. It's so well written, particularly Micah's confusion and ardour.

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bellonablack September 7 2009, 02:14:58 UTC
I'm re-reading this. Because I loved it so much the first time.

The details you put into this! (and I just realized that Sylar didn't necessarily lie to Danko when he says Rebel's a team. ACE.)

"The Cheerleader takes care of his shoulder, though, and Jesse lets him give as well as he takes."

That's such an interesting way to phrase it. It's like he's thinking of them as 'friends' or allies even.

And the Virginia line is too perfect.

And I loved it down to the description of Molly's phone and the pictures on it--and the picture of her family (and that Micah is not on it. For obv. reasons but something more)

So many layers on the second re-reading...:-)

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davincis_girl September 7 2009, 12:42:55 UTC
Damn, what a great ending to this chapter.

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