Minor elegy

Jul 11, 2006 02:44



Of all things, I regret these:
tears that drew you to my side,
the smile you gave me in exchange for words,
my fingers mapping your body, the lone hand
reaching for the sky. Would that
I were too strong for weeping,
and you too weak to touch tears.

(You were my shelter; you
kept me safe
from nonexistent storms.)

Lifetimes later I smile at sorrow
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kudoskudoskudos July 10 2006, 18:53:09 UTC
not a love poem -- as if you needed that warning

omg love... gaspppp..

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miir July 10 2006, 18:56:14 UTC
Dude it's a hate poem okayyyyyy.

Well not exactly but still.

& ka!

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kudoskudoskudos July 10 2006, 18:57:41 UTC
hahaha... ok!

omg hate! gaspppp..

&!!

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kudoskudoskudos July 10 2006, 19:00:18 UTC
it's a beautiful poem btw :p

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error_in_syntax July 11 2006, 00:05:30 UTC
*clap clap clap*

as expected from mommeh!

BTW its far from December/February, yet Love (or something related to it) Poems are still being written. :D

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miir July 11 2006, 17:38:09 UTC
IT'S JAKE'S FAULT

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kudoskudoskudos July 11 2006, 23:49:04 UTC


what did i dooooo?

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miir July 12 2006, 17:06:19 UTC
;_;

Wala na tuloy nagcocomment~ Why oh whyyyyyy~~~~

/wrist

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