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HIMYM/The Guild: Stinson's Got Game - 1 - The Show Must Go On

Jan 18, 2009 23:59

Stinson's got Game

a HIMYM/The Guild crossover
Chapter 1 - The show must go on Pairing: Barney/Codex
Rating: FRM/AO
Genre: Romance, Porn With Some Plot
Note: Set after HIMYM 4.12, 'Benefits', and somewhere in The Guild's as of yet non-existent season 3. Alternate Universe. Mentions "30 Rock", another great series.
Word count: 1785 (this chapter)
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the guild, barney, fic:stinson's got game, fanfic, lo-sequence, brodex, idioticonion, codex, barney/codex, himym

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jerseystrife January 18 2009, 23:50:10 UTC

I am totally geeky for finding this silly-hot. I love this so much :)

I feel incredibly geeky in a good way after reading this because it is a very nice hot scene with webcam action. They are going to be so explosive together once they meet face-to-face.

Hopefully Barney or Codex doesn't crap out and mess up what is going on here.

BTW? Very nice job with the chemistry you have going on through the dialogue. It reads really nicely.

nomduclavier January 19 2009, 00:23:02 UTC

Thanks, jersey :D

As a geek guy who has a geek girl for his better half, I might've had an advantage when it came to writing this. Although, as I'm also a gent (well, I can be), exactly how true to life this is, I'll leave between her and I :P

I couldn't say if it's totally geeky to find this silly hot. I did, but then I'm a member of the same geeky league, so not best qualified to answer that question.

I also hope that neither of them messes up. Both could use a decent relationship, and they appear eminently well suited for each other.

Hopefully there'll be another chapter tomorrow, with the conclusion of the cam chat. Then later the business meeting and date proper. :)

idioticonion January 19 2009, 00:37:44 UTC

I'd quite like to see them both getting it wrong and being a bit awkward together. It'd be fun. And Barney IS Tedding out about her a bit... :-D

nomduclavier January 19 2009, 01:21:57 UTC

Getting what wrong, exactly? The next part of the cam 'chat', or their transition as they fumble from cyberspace into meatspace? :P

He IS Tedding out about her a bit, indeed :D
(Which is so much fun to write, a flapped unflappable one)

idioticonion January 19 2009, 18:09:08 UTC

>Getting what wrong, exactly?

What I mean is that one or either of them screws up the sexy "mood" and pushes things out of kilter. It would be easy for them to both revert to "geek" type and be a little inept in the seduction scenario.

>The next part of the cam 'chat', or their transition as they fumble from cyberspace into meatspace? :P

Either one works!

nomduclavier January 19 2009, 18:10:23 UTC

I have been thinking something for the cam chat going off kilter. *whispers*
(read as: I'll tell you in PM)

idioticonion January 19 2009, 19:13:55 UTC

Cool! And in response to your request for a woman's perspective, I have re-read the story. I think it's pretty much stop on, honestly. Codex isn't a girly-girl, she's a geek, a gamer, but she's secretly a romantic at heart. I think so far you've got it exactly right.

nomduclavier January 19 2009, 19:16:58 UTC

Thank you :) I thought so, but I wasn't entirely certain.

I've modeled Barney on me and Codex on Lo for this story (well, somewhat... situation is entirely different - and though I got spades of game, I'm not a womaniser), and since I know both of us well... :P

Lo's ashamed of herself when on the odd occasion she goes girly-girl, or squee's like a fangirl in public. True Story. I can't say I blame her, I love her geek self to bits, and I'm glad she's not the girly-girl type.

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