The finale of Nightmare
Two Years Later
Roy adjusted his glasses as he walked through the halls of Central Headquarters. He passed by various lieutenants, majors, sergeants and other military personnel. All looked at him with some mix of fear and respect, but none really looked at him as a human being. It was a persona he really worked to engender while in the office. It ( Read more... )
Roy adjusted his glasses as he walked through the halls of Central Headquarters. He passed by various lieutenants, majors, sergeants and other military personnel. All looked at him with some mix of fear and respect, but none really looked at him as a human being. It was a persona he really worked to engender while in the office. It ( Read more... )
I'm a bit sad that this is the end, but this chapter really was a great end :D I just *loved* the part with Olivier XD""" About Breda... well, since we already talked about it, it wasn't a shock anymore, but I still grin like crazy about it XD"""
And *thanks* and *hugs* for the bit with Wrath ~.^ While it was just hinted, I'm sure he and Winry got together ^_______^ *crosses fingers* XD"
The talk at the end was just the right way to end it all^^ And I *laughed* at Ed saying he nearly fell of that building XD"""" (and I have to be quiet too since Criss and Kristin are sleeping right behind me! XD""")
Thanks so much for this story^^ *hugs you* I loved it :D And even though (or maybe because) it was a topic I usually deal not that well with, you handled it very very well and very realistic^^
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I just couldn't leave it with anything less innocent than how it ended, but I'm glad you thought it felt realistic.
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Like I already said, it wouldn't have fit. I mean, if they had had sex right after Roy retold Ed being raped... I don't know, that just would have been very very unrealistic. The only way *that* would have worked if you had done another time-jump. But for this ff is just fits better this way^^
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