✘ Feedback & Concrit

May 22, 2020 21:29

Hi! This is my HMD and feedback for Donny.

He's an original character whose application and development is very much in-progress, but I'd really love to hear if you have any thoughts or suggestions for improvement. Concrit is welcome, but flames not so much.

Additionally, since Donny has a stammer and I really have no experience with that at all, I'd love for input on how I could deal with that better. If I do something that specifically cries out as wrong, I'd appreciate a heads up on that, too. I'm doing research, but I'm sure I'll make mistakes along the way, and would really appreciate advice on how to do it right.

That said, anon commenting is on, IP screening is off, and all comments will be screened.

Thanks for your time.

ooc, feedback & concrit

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